avatarJames G Brennan

Summary

Suki, a fashion-conscious hairstylist, discovers a novel way to enjoy a peaceful walk to work, free from unwanted attention, by wearing hairy stocking tights.

Abstract

The poem "Suki's Happy Walk" is a creative response to a challenge on inventive techno-colgmical solutions for everyday life. It narrates Suki's morning routine as she walks to her hairstyling job, highlighting her newfound sense of freedom and clarity of thought due to the lack of distracting attention she experiences while wearing 'anti pervert hairy stocking tights.' Despite her usual fashionable attire, Suki embraces this quirky invention to maintain her focus on the busy day ahead with six client appointments. The poem concludes with a nod to the inspiration behind the technology challenge and a reflection on the creative process, likening it to the philosophical journey described by Frank Herbert.

Opinions

  • The author suggests that the 'anti pervert hairy stocking tights' are a humorous yet practical solution to a societal issue.
  • Suki's character is portrayed positively, with an appreciation for both fashion and practicality.
  • The poem implies that personal space and freedom from harassment are important for mental clarity and productivity.
  • There is an underlying admiration for the inventive spirit that leads to solutions like Suki's hairy tights.
  • The mention of Frank Herbert indicates the author's respect for the power of will and desire in the creative process, particularly in writing and poetry.
  • The poem expresses gratitude towards platforms and individuals, like Martin Rushton, that encourage and support creative endeavors.

POETRY

Suki’s Happy Walk

A free verse poem response to Martin Rushton’s impromptu prompt on the use of techno-colgmical challenge weird but useful inventions

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Walking down the High street, Suki finds The lack of unwanted attention A new kind of freedom as she is now Able to think more clearly On the tasks at hand for Her busy day ahead.

It’s only twenty minutes to Suki’s Place of work but she likes to Take it in her stride. Just a little exercise at the start of her day, Clearing out the cobwebs From her good night’s peaceful sleep.

Suki is a fashion-conscious girl Short skirts are the order of the day, Suki has what you may call A most lovely set of pins.

Suki has six bookings for today, This makes Sukies day A very busy day. Suki is a hairstylist A very good one too.

Happy is Suki she found a way For a mind clear of distraction, A most useful invention she came across To throw off unwanted stares, A peaceful walk she now has With her anti pervert hairy stocking tights!

Funny really, given Suki is a hairstylist. Do you think Suki combs her legs Or just keeps them unkept? I suppose it depends on the fashion at the time.

Thank you for reading. J.

Thank you Martin Rushton for this technology challenge.

It is by will alone I set my mind in motion. It is by the desire to write that thoughts acquire speed, the mind acquires words, words become Poetry. It is by will alone I set my mind in motion. Frank Herbert and Me.

Thank you for your support and for giving my words a platform Martin Rushton a Few Words House of Haiku ILLUMINATION iPoetry Kitchen Tales Politically Speaking Resistance Poetry Share The Love 💚The POM💚 Vagabond Voices

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