avatarWendy S. Bradfield

Summary

The poem "Subconscious Strike" metaphorically depicts an internal struggle and acceptance of one's darker aspects, portrayed as a dance with a venomous snake.

Abstract

"Subconscious Strike" is a poem that captures the essence of an individual's internal conflict, symbolized as a battle with a shadowy figure. The speaker acknowledges the presence of a darker self, likened to a venomous cobra, which they must confront and embrace. The poem conveys a sense of fearless confidence as the speaker, akin to a snake charmer, confronts their inner demon, welcoming its strikes and venom as a testament to their resilience and experience. The dance between the two represents an ongoing, intimate relationship with one's dark side, suggesting that the speaker finds the darkness irresistible and is ready to fully engage with it, implying a form of self-acceptance and integration.

Opinions

  • The speaker views their inner darkness as a formidable opponent, yet they approach it with a sense of mastery and control.
  • There is a theme of embracing and even desiring the challenges posed by one's darker nature, as the speaker finds the venom (metaphorical struggles) to be invigorating.
  • The poem suggests that the relationship with one's dark side is complex and eternal, akin to a marriage that one cannot simply walk away from.
  • The speaker expresses a readiness to stop resisting and to fully integrate their darker aspects, indicating a shift towards wholeness and self-acceptance.

Subconscious Strike

Merging light & dark, a poem

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A great warrior, you fight Bloodied self, you battle Subconscious poison, a cobra strike Slender, swift, and precise — this demon Your shadow seeks the spotlight Crouch and switch the beam on

Dance away, you devious wretch I, the snake charmer, always collect the best Kiss me on the lips; I fear you not Strike as you will Your venom, oh, how it hits the spot You forget, I’m experienced

Slink and sway; I shall charm Strike my heart or swallow me whole I fashion your skin; don it on my arms This dance is eternal Let us marry and mate For your darkness is irresistible

I no longer wish to wait

Self
Psychology
Poetry
Transformation
Spirituality
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