avatarSaniya Saleem

Summary

The poem reflects on the struggle to maintain a relationship amidst pain, betrayal, and the fear of loss, questioning whether anyone will offer the same support that is being given.

Abstract

The poem "Save me too..?" delves into the emotional turmoil of a relationship fraught with suffering and deception. It paints a picture of a world where the sky pours bitter truths, and the walls echo with anguish. The speaker feels a hollow emptiness, a premonition that nothing lasts, and yet they are unable to leave the "sad house" of their relationship. They grapple with the inability to read their partner's true intentions, leading to a cycle of separation and reconciliation. The poem conveys a deep longing to rescue the partner, while acknowledging the speaker's own vulnerability and need for salvation from the emotional storm that threatens to engulf them both.

Opinions

  • The speaker feels a profound sense of despair, indicated by the "screaming pain" of the walls and the "bitter" truths raining from the sky.
  • There is a recurring theme of impermanence, with the speaker acknowledging that nothing lasts forever and that relationships can disintegrate despite efforts to preserve them.
  • The poem suggests a complex interplay of emotions, including pity, disgrace, and the desire for deeper understanding in the relationship.
  • The speaker expresses a sense of helplessness, being caught between the desire to save their partner and the realization that they too are in need of rescue.
  • The poem reflects on the difficulty of letting go, with the speaker admitting they are not strong enough to release the relationship, nor brave enough to face the potential destruction of staying together.
  • The speaker's plea, "is there anyone willing to save me too?" implies a hope for reciprocal support and a fear of being emotionally abandoned.

Save me too..?

Poetry

Photo by Blake Cheek on Unsplash

The walls’ screaming pain and suffer,

The sky raining truth that’s bitter

All this summer feels like autumn

Got an empty feeling in my stomach

That nothing ever lasts forever,

Will you not leave this sad house never?

Is it a pity or a disgrace that your eyes lie

Making me wish If I could read your mind.

But, here we are again, going back to each other after everything falls apart,

Even after everything keeps us apart.

Maybe I'm not strong enough to let it all go,

But I’m not brave enough either to let the storm destroy us both.

I wanna save you, But this time, just this time, I am drowning too

And I wonder is there anyone willing to save me too?

Save Me
Love
Heartbreak
Sad Love
Ocean Of Love
Recommended from ReadMedium