avatarCee Arr

Summary

The web content is a poetic reflection on the apocalyptic themes inspired by songs and the feeling of impending change or end, with a call to embrace one's true self and the power of words.

Abstract

The poem titled "Rustling — Poetry" delves into a world where the influence of music permeates the writer's creative process, leading to a series of rhetorical questions that evoke the senses and provoke contemplation of a bleak and transformative landscape. The author, Cee, uses vivid imagery of nature and the elements to convey a sense of foreboding and inevitable change, suggesting that the world is on the cusp of a significant shift. The poem speaks to the personal responsibility one has in the face of such change, encouraging the reader to acknowledge their role and the impact of their actions. It concludes with an affirmation of identity and the lasting impact of one's words, likening the writer to the mythical "Lady from the Lake." The content also includes a quote from Oscar Wilde, emphasizing the theme of rebirth and renewal, and provides links to additional poetry by the author and a weekly writing prompt.

Opinions

  • The author acknowledges the influence of music, specifically Ren songs, on their creative output.
  • There is a palpable sense of impending doom and environmental change, as suggested by the "smoke is in the grass" and "the way the land shrieks out."
  • The poem suggests a cyclical nature of life and challenges, as seen in the lines "This cycle's not your last" and "The die it has been cast."
  • There is an emphasis on personal growth and transformation, with the speaker asking if one can embody the necessary change, implying that it is both unasked for and liberating.
  • The author seems to believe in the enduring legacy of words, suggesting that the reader's writings could become "lore."
  • The inclusion of the Oscar Wilde quote reflects the author's view on the regenerative power of time and the restoration of the world to its "antique pattern."

Rustling — Poetry

…This is what happens when you listen to too many Ren songs when writing poetry, apparently *shrugs* — blaming the universe, tbh.

Photo by Atlas Green on Unsplash

Do — you feel it? It’s coming on the wind Heard it as the reed beds Rustled for our sins

Do — you see it? Breaking of the day Bleakness of the landscape Steals your breath away.

Can — you feel it? Smoke is in the grass. Sun is rising overhead — this may be the last.

Do — you hear it? Something’s coming in Wraps and wraps of funeral shroud Sent here for your sins.

Do — you notice? The way the world seems now Wait until the wheel turns Then we’ll give a bow

Do — you feel it? The smoke is lifting soon Miles and miles of smog and dust Crept into your room

Can — you be it? The thing you have to be, I know you didn’t ask for it The truth will set you free.

Do — you see it? This cycle’s not your last It’s tough and rough and hurts, but The die it has been cast

Can — you feel it? The murmurs underground The way the land shrieks out, and The fires all around.

Will — you mean it? With every breath you take This is who you are now, The Lady from the Lake

Do — you know it? Deep inside your core Don’t stop up the dam, now, Your words, they will be lore.

Prompt from the resident Ravyne Hawke:

“Veil after veil of thin dusky gauze is lifted, and by degrees the forms and colours of things are restored to them, and we watch the dawn remaking the world in its antique pattern.” ― Oscar Wilde, The Picture of Dorian Gray

Get unlimited access to all stories on Medium using my referral link here; I receive commission for memberships purchased through this link

Poetry
Poetry On Medium
Poem
Poems On Medium
Promptly Written
Recommended from ReadMedium
avatarJenine Bsharah Baines
Borders

Oh, the walls we build…

2 min read