avatarMarie A. Rebelle

Summary

Jack and Julia, co-workers with mutual attraction, end up having sex in a stalled elevator, unaware that their tryst is being recorded by a camera.

Abstract

The narrative "Riding Up To Floor Forty-Four" details an erotic encounter between Jack and Julia, two office workers who finally act on their sexual tension when they become trapped in an elevator. As they ascend the building, the lift halts between floors twenty-seven and twenty-eight, leading to an intense and passionate sexual experience. Their attraction, which had been noticed by colleagues, culminates in a frenzied act of lovemaking against the elevator's back wall, with their reflection visible in the mirrors. The story concludes with the revelation that their escapade was inadvertently broadcast to an audience via a camera in the elevator, ending with a mix of embarrassment and satisfaction as they resume their ascent to the forty-fourth floor.

Opinions

  • The author suggests that the sexual tension between Jack and Julia was an open secret in their office.
  • The narrative implies that the characters' mutual attraction was inevitable and that their colleagues expected them to engage in a sexual relationship.
  • The story conveys a sense of urgency and inevitability in the characters' actions, driven by their strong physical attraction.
  • The inclusion of the camera in the elevator introduces a theme of voyeurism, suggesting that the characters' private moment was observed by others, which adds an element of exhibitionism to their encounter.
  • The author seems to delight in the details of the sexual act, emphasizing the physical compatibility between Jack and Julia.
  • The conclusion of the story with the characters' realization that they were being watched adds a twist that may evoke a sense of irony or humor in the reader.
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EROTIC FICTION

Riding Up To Floor Forty-Four

Everyone knew it was just a matter of time before they fucked each other — written for this prompt on Tantalizing Tales…

Had they not been already, the jolt with which the lift came to a halt would have thrown Jack and Julia into each other’s arms.

Jack glanced at the lighted numbers on the display above the door.

“Twenty-seven and twenty-eight,” he said. “I guess we’re stuck between those floors.”

He wanted to free himself from Julia’s embrace, but her hand on his cheek turned his face back to face her.

“We have unfinished business,” she said.

He instantly understood.

Lowering his head back to hers, they continued their kiss, and his hands roamed the side of her body again. He had trapped her between the back wall of the lift and his body, but she made no attempt to escape.

In fact, she grabbed his hand and moved it to her breast. Her intent made clear, she lowered her hands to the belt on his pants and fumbled to loosen it.

A groan echoed off the mirrored walls of the enclosed space when she freed his cock. He moaned even louder when she crouched and took him in her mouth. Steadying himself against the wall, he alternated looking down and watching her in the mirror while she sucked him.

He bucked his hips to fuck her mouth, but almost to the point of no return, he abruptly pulled out of her mouth, grabbed her shoulders and turned her to face the wall.

Together, they pulled up her dress. His momentary surprise at her nakedness above the stockings disappeared as she hungrily speared herself on his erection.

Jack slowly fucked Julia while their reflection showed his rigid member moving in and out of her body.

Their lovemaking was frantic.

For weeks they had eyes each other in the office on the forty-fourth floor, and sexual tension was palpable not only for them but also their colleagues had gotten a notion of their mutual attraction. Everyone knew it was just a matter of time before they fucked each other.

Some thought they already had.

“Your cunt is as tight as I thought it would be,” Jack panted between thrusts.

“Your. Dick. Is. A. Perfect. Fit.” Julia said, each word uttered when he slammed deep into her.

They moaned and panted.

Groaned and mumbled.

Incoherently.

He was the first to capitulate to the onslaught of her vaginal walls on the sensitive flesh of his member.

The spasms of his cock also sent Julia over the edge.

While his cum started trickling out of her pussy, the two of them pulled their clothes back into place, and Julia turned towards the mirror and combed through her hair with her fingers.

Satisfied they were both presentable again, Jack raised his hand to press the emergency button.

He jerked his hand back, and Julia let out a scream when the lift jolted back to life. They both looked up at the display and watched the numbers run up to their floor.

Just before the lift doors opened, their eyes shot up at the ceiling of the lift as a voice filled the space: “Thank you for the show, Julia and Jack!”

Sheepish grins decorated their faces as they glanced up at the camera inside the lift, something both of them had forgotten about in their lust-filled frenzy.

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Elevator
Sensuality
Erotic Fiction
Fiction
Short Story
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