avatarTree Langdon

Summary

A poetic narrative about a person facing a critical decision amidst harsh circumstances, reflecting on the struggle with addiction and the hope of redemption.

Abstract

The poem "Riding the Tide" depicts a person in a dire situation, seeking shelter beside a dumpster, confronted with the physical realities of a grim environment and the internal battle with substance abuse. The protagonist's reflection on his life's choices is palpable as he prepares to gamble with his well-being, symbolized by the metaphor of a river's flow. The poem suggests a moment of truth where the character must decide his next move, which could lead to his demise or survival. The author invites readers who resonate with the poem to explore more of their work, particularly the book "We Swallow Light," which delves into themes of overcoming pain and finding love.

Opinions

  • The author acknowledges the difficulty of the subject matter, indicating a recognition of the poem's dark themes.
  • There is an appreciation expressed towards Lucy Dan for providing the prompt 'tough-choices,' which inspired the poem.
  • The inclusion of a link to another poem, "The Right Choice," suggests a thematic connection and possibly a shared exploration of decision-making and its consequences.
  • The mention of other individuals—Chloe Hill, Stuart Englander, Will Hull, Natasha Kurien, Michael Ranjitsingh, Carlos Garbiras, and Lori Lamothe—implies a community of creators or supporters, though their specific opinions are not detailed.

Riding the Tide

Prompt-tough choices.

Photo by Nathan Dumlao on Unsplash

Rust drips From metal pipes above. He sprawls on roughly textured cold. The dumpster offers shelter from their greedy eyes; a refuge in the space behind.

A deep breath catches in his gut spearing him through the fog. A splay of bitten nails lands upon his face.

Close examination brings a crust of grease specked with flakes of green.

He wipes the sticky thickness on his brow smearing grease into the blood. A tide of need turns within.

It’s time to roll the dice. Like the river and the rain, a full swell or a trickle.

The measured hit contains a deadly dose or none.

He makes the choice.

If you enjoyed this poem, have a look at my book, We Swallow Light. It’s an exploration of events in a past life and a refreshing take on overcoming pain and the joy of finding love.

Thanks Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她) for this prompt ‘tough-choices’.

Sorry folks, this one is a bit dark….

Chloe Hill, Stuart Englander, Will Hull, Natasha Kurien, Michael Ranjitsingh, Carlos Garbiras, Lori Lamothe

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