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Summary

Rapunzel, a young woman under the guardianship of Galitia, seeks sexual freedom and experiences, including the desire to be with a man, despite Galitia's strict prohibition.

Abstract

In a retelling of the Rapunzel fairy tale, the narrative delves into the protagonist's sexual awakening and her desire for autonomy. Rapunzel, cursed at birth by the sorceress Galitia, is forbidden from leaving her tower or engaging with men. Despite having relationships with women, including Flora and Letty, Rapunzel yearns for a broader sexual experience, particularly with a man. Galitia's refusal to allow this leads to tension and Rapunzel's defiance. A newcomer to the village, Nicolotto, disguises himself as a woman named Nicolosa to gain access to Rapunzel, ultimately fulfilling her desire for a heterosexual encounter. The story explores themes of control, freedom, and the pursuit of personal desires against the backdrop of a dark fairy tale.

Opinions

  • Galitia is portrayed as controlling and fearful of Rapunzel's potential, particularly her sexuality.
  • Rapunzel is depicted as a sexually curious and adventurous individual who challenges the constraints placed upon her.
  • Letty's character conveys a progressive view on relationships, advocating for openness and honesty in sexual desires.
  • Flora's nonchalant and free-spirited approach to relationships suggests a critique of monogamy and societal norms.
  • The villagers' gossip and Galitia's actions imply a societal discomfort with female sexuality, especially when it deviates from traditional expectations.
  • Nicolotto's deception and Rapunzel's willing acceptance of him reflect the lengths to which individuals will go to fulfill their desires, as well as the complexity of human relationships.
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Rapunzel — Something is Missing

Part 4: I want to be free to have relationships outside of ours…

Summary: Galitia made a deal with a fallen angel … If she cursed a babe each year, then she would not age. The child would grow to cause destruction in the world. However, she had been warned that on her 200th year, a golden-haired child would be born who would lead to her own downfall. Rapunzel is that child. Galitia feels all that Rapunzel does and as the young woman embraces her sexuality, Galitia plans her next move.

Galitia once again thought she had solved her problems. Flora and Rapunzel were nearly inseparable during the daylight hours as Rapunzel practiced making Flora orgasm as easily as Flora did for her. When Galitia could not satisfy her own desires, she called on Letty. Her evenings were quiet and she was able to focus while Rapunzel relaxed.

A week into the new routine, Rapunzel surprised Galitia by asking to see Letty again. Seeing no harm that could come from Rapunzel having multiple women as her lovers, Galitia set it up.

“How have you been, my sweet flower?” Letty asked when she entered Rapunzel’s room.

“Wonderful.”

“And our lesson…”

“Let’s just say Flora is as thankful as I am.” Rapunzel replied with a coy smile.

“That makes me happy. Galitia said you wanted to see me.”

“I do. I have a few questions.”

Letty was just a bit disappointed. She was hoping the beautiful woman in front of her had more carnal needs.

“Of course. What’s on your mind?”

“Is it wrong for me to desire someone other than Flora?”

“No. Not at all.” Letty said as she took the seat next to Rapunzel. “In my mind, desiring another can never be wrong. Humans are attracted to multiple people, that is just nature. However, it is up to you and Flora to decide if acting on those desires would be wrong.”

“How so?”

“Some couples are monogamous. They never physically engage with anyone outside the couple. My husband and I are much more open. We have agreed that I can pursue women as I desire as long as I am open about it.”

“That sounds one sided.”

“From the outside looking in, it is. I have desires to be with both men and women. For obvious reasons, my husband can’t meet both desires. He is the only man I have been with since we married. I have admired other men but never had an urge to act. I do clearly have desires for women and act on them. My husband has desires only for me. If he had desires I couldn’t meet, I would support him finding a way to fulfill them. Because I am open to this, our relationship is fair even though I am the only one having sex outside our marriage. We communicate honestly and it works for us.”

“I love how trusting you are.”

“Thank you. What brought this up?”

“Well, Flora, she’s amazing. She’s so full of life.”

“But…”

“I still want to be with a man. I want to know what it is like. Is that wrong?”

“Absolutely not. Did Flora say it was wrong?”

“No. I haven’t discussed it with her but I get the impression she will not be upset.”

“I have the same feeling.”

Rapunzel didn’t catch the chuckle Letty fought back. Flora was known for being a free spirit and trying to seduce every woman in town, even those who paid her no interest. It would be hypocritical of her to place restrictions on Rapunzel.

“You must talk with her soon. It will only eat at you until you do.”

“I will.” Rapunzel said as she stood up.

Letty stood as well and welcomed Rapunzel’s hug. When Rapunzel slid her hands down Letty’s back and grabbed her butt, Letty kissed her. Their talk was over but the day was just getting started.

The next morning when Rapunzel and Flora were alone in the tower, Rapunzel jumped right in to what she needed to say.

“Flora, I have desires for other women and for men.”

“Men are so ehh, but other women, that I get. We come in so many sexy shapes and sizes. Some are submissive, some more dominant. So many things to explore.”

“I’m not sure if you understand what I am saying. I want to be free to have relationships outside of ours.” Rapunzel said confidently.

Rapunzel didn’t know what to think when Flora burst into laughter.

“Rapunzel, you don’t need my permission. You can spread your legs for whomever you please. I think of you as a good friend and a damn sexy fuck but I have no plans to tie you down and I don’t want you to think you can tie me down either. I have no plans to settle down any time soon, if at all.”

Rapunzel had to hide her hurt just a little. She wanted Flora to have at least a bit of jealousy.

“If I misled you, I’m sorry.” Flora said when she noticed Rapunzel’s reaction.

“No. There is no need to apologize. I’m happy we understand each other.”

“Which guy do you have in mind?” Flora asked with a smirk.

“What do you mean?”

“You like to watch the guys in the field. You think about them fucking you, don’t you.”

“All the time.” Rapunzel laughed. “I want to know what it is like to have one of them ramming into me, to have them deep inside me.”

“I’ll be back in twenty minutes.”

Before Rapunzel could even ask why, Flora had run down the tower steps. True to her word, she returned quickly, hiding something behind her back.

“I have a surprise.” Flora beamed.

“What is it?”

“I’ll let you know when I’m ready but you have to follow all my orders.”

“Okay.”

“Go out on the balcony and watch the boys at work.”

Rapunzel stood still, slightly confused.

“Go. Go.” Flora chuckled as she waived her outside. “No coming inside or turning around until I say.”

“Okay.”

Rapunzel wanted to know what Flora was doing to herself to make her moan but she had been well conditioned to follow rules her entire life so she continued to watch the young men in the field as her lover’s whimpers aroused her.

“Okay close your eyes.”

“They’re closed.”

“Can you make it to your bed safely or do you need me to lead you?”

“I can make it.”

“Okay. Come in but don’t open your eyes.”

Rapunzel made it to her bed without trouble.

“Take off your clothes, get in bed, and spread your legs.”

Rapunzel did as she was told. Flora pulled the linen over her face to ensure she didn’t peek.

“Hey.”

“I just want to ensure it’s a surprise.”

Rapunzel could tell Flora was in between her legs. Her curiosity went into overdrive as Flora gasped.

“Good, you’re nice and wet for me.”

Flora’s finger running along Rapunzel’s pussy was not enough to satisfy Rapunzel. She needed more. The moment Flora plunged into Rapunzel, Rapunzel cried out in pleasure and shock.

Flora pulled the linen away to find Rapunzel’s eyes wide open and staring straight into hers. Flora held her tight as she thrust into her.

“What are you… How are…”

Flora refused to answer until she pounded Rapunzel a few more times.

“Let’s just say pleasing the daughter of a quarry man has its benefits.”

After kissing Rapunzel deeply, Flora raised up and pulled back, allowing Rapunzel to get her first look at the perfectly smooth, perfectly polished piece of marble, half still inserted in Flora’s pussy, half glistening with Rapunzel’s juices.

“Oh fuck.” Rapunzel gasped as the truly rock-hard instrument was thrust back inside her.

“Close your eyes and fantasize about being fucked by a man while I see how fast I can make your tits bounce.”

The pain caused by the initial penetration faded and soon Rapunzel was begging for Flora to fuck her harder and faster. She wasn’t fantasizing about any man, the lust in Flora’s eyes made it impossible to think of anyone but her at that moment. They continued to fuck, using the toy until both their pussies were sore.

Galitia watched with concern through the peephole. Rapunzel was clearly drawn to deep penetration. When the two women switched to eating each other, joking about kisses making it feel better, it gave Galitia little reprieve. She knew what Rapunzel wanted.

When Flora was preparing to leave, she reached for the marble dildo.

“Do you have to take it?” Rapunzel whimpered.

“I guess I can leave it. I’ll just have to convince Anis to have her father make another one. It shouldn’t be a problem; I have a way with her.”

Rapunzel didn’t mind sending Flora into the arms of another woman, as long as she had the toy to play with as she pleased.

It was three days of nearly constant toying with herself before Rapunzel had the courage to talk to Galitia. They had just sat down for dinner when Rapunzel said, “I am thankful for you introducing me to Flora and Letty but I need more.”

“They are unable to satisfy you?”

“That is not it. I want to know what it is like to be with a man.”

“That can never happen!”

Rapunzel jumped back. She had never seen Galitia react like that.

“Rapunzel, I cannot explain to you why. Cannot is not the right term. I can but I refuse. I will make myself very clear. You are never to have any relations with a man. Give up all thoughts of it now. I will never allow it.”

“Why? Letty says I should be free to live my life as I choose. I want to have sex with a man, maybe many different men.”

“I do not care what anyone else says. I will not explain myself again. It will not happen.”

Galitia dragged Rapunzel back to the tower using Rapunzel’s own rage as a source of her strength. She locked the tower and stormed back off to the manor, angry for ever introducing Rapunzel to the outside world.

By the next morning, Rapunzel’s rage had only increased. She no longer wanted to be controlled and she would no longer follow Galitia’s orders blindly. However, she had no way out of the tower. The fall from the balcony would kill her and the door was far too solid to break as was the lock. She stewed in her room for several days, only allowing Galitia to give her food and drink, refusing to speak to her.

As they settled into a stalemate, Rapunzel refusing to give in on her demands and Galitia restricting Rapunzel from ever leaving the tower, Galitia continued to try to satisfy Rapunzel’s sexual desires by bringing to her every woman in town who was interested. Rapunzel enjoyed their company but she still wanted to experience sex with a man.

By now, Rapunzel’s sexual appetite was the gossip of the village. Every woman who wanted to be with the golden-haired beauty had been with her, most many times. The only woman banned from trying to satisfy Rapunzel was Letty. Galitia couldn’t chance her inspiring Rapunzel to do something reckless.

More than a few young men called on Rapunzel, through Galitia, but they were all vehemently turned away and Galitia noted who they were and used her power of persuasion to convince them to move from the village. Fearing losing their sons, parents began to discourage them from pursuing Rapunzel.

As Rapunzel enjoyed the morning on her balcony, Nicolotto watched her, stunned by the way her hair seemingly outshone the sun. She had no idea this villager had been admiring her from afar for weeks.

Nicolotto had first heard of Rapunzel when visiting a local gathering shortly after he had arrived in town. The villagers raved of her beauty and whispered about her sexual appetite. He knew instantly he needed to meet her but he learned just as quickly that he would be turned away by her caretaker.

As Nicolotto continued to look up at her, a young woman walked past him, heading toward the gate of the manor grounds. Galitia met the young woman at the gate and with barely a word, she let her in. Nicolotto moved closer to observe. The young woman was led to the tower door and allowed to enter as soon as Galitia unlocked it. He saw Galitia replace the lock, effectively trapping Rapunzel’s visitor.

He stayed close to the gates, listening to the interaction between Rapunzel and her guest. He could not hear every detail but he gathered that Rapunzel was unhappy. He was sure he could bring her happiness but he had to get to her first.

That evening as he ate in the town square, Nicolotto ignored the mocking from some of the locals. He had only moved to town recently, still staying at the inn, and had not endeared himself to anyone. His love of music and the arts was not well received by the salt of the earth type who made the village their home. He had no idea how the people accepted Galitia’s rule over them. He couldn’t see what she provided or what made her so valuable that they catered to her needs, providing her food and anything else she needed.

When one of the locals hollered something at Nicolotto, he shook his head, laughed, then thanked him for the great idea. As he hustled back to his room at the inn, his heckler felt triumphant.

Nicolotto used the next two days to prepare his plan, carefully gathering what he needed while trying to avoid detection from any of the shop keepers. The morning he set his plan in place, he took a final glance in the mirror. What he had been chided about for all his adult life was now working to his advantage.

When he approached the manor gate, Galitia caught sight of him. She approached with a cautious manner.

“May I help you?” She asked from behind the iron bars.

“I would like to meet Rapunzel.”

“I do not know you.”

“My name is Nicolosa.”

“I still do not know you.”

“I moved in to town recently.”

“I do not like strangers.” Galitia huffed to the young woman. “Go away.”

Nicolotto did not protest, deciding to wait until he could build trust with Galitia.

“Who was at the gate earlier today?” Rapunzel asked when her lunch was delivered.

“A woman I do not know.”

Rapunzel could tell that Galitia was bothered by the unknown visitor. This inspired Rapunzel to aggravate her captor more. Later that day, Rapunzel saw the woman who had been at the gate earlier.

“Hello.” She called from the balcony.

“Hello.”

“I’m Rapunzel.”

“I’m Nic…” He stopped himself before he ruined his plan. “I’m Nicolosa.”

“It is nice to meet you.”

“Likewise.” Nicolosa said with a smile. “Are you able to invite me in.”

“No, but come back tomorrow and ask Galitia.” Rapunzel said, knowing this would drive Galitia crazy.

“I will.”

Nicolotto was so happy to have had even a brief conversation with Rapunzel, he forgot he was still dressed as a woman. As he walked past the innkeeper on his way to the room he rented, he got a peculiar look. The innkeeper didn’t approve but as long as he was paid, he was willing to look the other way and keep his mouth shut.

The next morning, Nicolosa once again called on Rapunzel. Galitia refused again, still untrusting of any stranger. Galitia was surprised when Rapunzel asked to join her at dinner. Rapunzel had insisted on eating alone ever since Galitia had denied her request to meet a man. Galitia was happy to have Rapunzel dine with her, a brief reprieve from the loneliness they had both been feeling.

“Have you met Nicolosa? She is new in town?” Rapunzel asked.

“I have. She came to the manor.”

“I had no idea.”

“How do you know about her? You haven’t had many visitors lately.”

“She was walking so close to the manor wall; I was able to get her attention and speak with her briefly.”

Galitia was clearly annoyed. She hated when villagers got too close to her home without an invitation or announcing themselves.

“I see.”

“Something about her is intriguing.” Rapunzel said.

“I agree.”

Rapunzel was lying. She had no interest in Nicolosa other than annoying Galitia. Galitia was intrigued but couldn’t put her finger on it.

“I would like to meet her.”

“I will consider it.”

Galitia watched the next day as Rapunzel and Nicolosa chatted from a distance. She slowly started to notice that Rapunzel had a genuine like for the stranger. Maybe it could work in Galitia’s favor. Maybe Rapunzel found a woman who could satisfy her.

The next day when Nicolosa came to the gate, she was allowed in and led to the tower.

“Her room is upstairs.” Galitia said before locking the door again.

Nicolotto took a deep breath. He had to remain in character at least for now. He needed to be Nicolosa.

Rapunzel had been watching and was expecting Nicolosa. She greeted her at the door.

“Please come in.”

“Thank you.”

Rapunzel got her first good look at the young woman she had been chatting with. Her makeup was too heavy and her dress very modest but she was attractive. Nicolosa was awestruck by Rapunzel’s beauty. All the talk in town was true.

“You have a lovely home.” Nicolosa said, trying to maintain a feminine voice.

“It is a prison.”

“How so.”

“I am not allowed to leave. Galitia fears what would happen if I enter the world. Something has her terrified.”

“I had no idea.”

“There is no way you could no. Galitia works hard to hide the truth.”

“Why does she keep you?”

“When I was a baby, my parents died. She took me in and for the longest time, she gave me a wonderful life. As I have aged, she has changed. I want to live my life but she will not allow it. Even the plants around my tower are poisonous; another attempt to control me.”

“No one should be captive like this. A parent or a caregiver must allow their charge to step away at some point. Ready to support them if needed but knowing at times they will fail and learn from their failures and mistakes.”

“If only you could convince Galitia of this.”

Rapunzel was happy for an honest conversation. Lately all of her suitors came specifically for sex and while she still had an active sex drive, she did enjoy a pleasant conversation. At no point did Nicolosa make a move. She actually avoided physical contact during her entire visit.

“Will you come back tomorrow?” Rapunzel asked as Nicolosa prepared to leave.

“I would love to.”

Their second visit was similar to their first but after they had lunch on the third day, Rapunzel saw the look in Nicolosa’s eyes. It was the look all her lovers had just before they made their move.

“Rapunzel, I want to kiss you.” Nicolosa whispered.

Rapunzel stepped closer and reached for her hand. She was happy to have a woman who didn’t just assume sex was included with every visit.

“Then kiss me.”

Nicolosa was careful not to press against Rapunzel’s body as they kissed, still unsure how the truth would be received.

“Your beauty has never been matched.” Nicolosa said as they broke a gentle but passionate kiss.

“You flatter me.”

“If the truth is flattering.”

Rapunzel kept Nicolosa’s hand in hers as she led her to the bed. She reached for Nicolosa’s dress but Nicolosa took her wrist in her hand and prevented her.

“Not until I please you. I insist.”

Rapunzel didn’t protest as Nicolosa helped her out of her dress and motioned for her to get in the bed. After her skilled lover’s tongue brought her to a second orgasm, Rapunzel insisted that she be allowed to return the pleasure she had been given.

“That would be lovely.” Nicolosa responded even as she stepped off the bed. “But I have a secret I’ve been hiding from you.”

“I know. I have barely seen an inch of your body and you’ve seen every inch of mine.” Rapunzel sang as she sat up.

Rapunzel wasn’t exaggerating. She was naked and Nicolosa’s dress covered her from her wrists to her ankles, even hiding her entire neck.

“Rapunzel, if my secret is too much for you, say so and I will go away forever.”

Rapunzel was confused and watched intently as Nicolosa bent down and grabbed the bottom of her dress. As she stood up, she slowly raised her dress.

Rapunzel didn’t notice anything shocking at first but as she hiked her dress higher, there was something different about her thighs. While thin, they had just a bit more muscle mass than her previous lovers. Rapunzel’s hopes were fully met as Nicolosa’s continued movement revealed a pair of swollen testicles and a thick erection.

Nicolotto had his face covered by the bottom of the dress so he had no idea of Rapunzel’s reaction as he pulled the dress over his head.

Rapunzel was trying hard not to pounce him. He was not the man she had fantasized about, not a well build muscular man, but he was a man. It didn’t matter that he had slightly feminine features. In fact, it was his soft features that allowed him to trick Galitia.

By the time he could see her again, it was clear what Rapunzel wanted. She had moved back onto the bed and spread her legs for him.

“Take me.”

Nicolotto climbed on top of her and before he could even kiss her, she had grabbed his butt and pushed him inside her.

“Oh god. I’ve dreamed of this.” Rapunzel moaned as his fleshy cock filled her pussy. “I need this.”

Nicolotto wrapped his arms around her and started to thrust.

“Fuck me.”

“Oh god, never stop.”

Nicolotto could not have hoped for a better reaction. Rumors in town said Rapunzel was interested in both women and men but rumors were just that and he had tricked her to meet her.

Rapunzel’s cries of passion grew louder and Nicolotto feared she would attract attention. He kissed her deeply to quiet her, holding her silky hair in his fist to prevent her from pulling away.

“Can you be quieter?”

“Yes.”

When the urge to scream hit her again, Rapunzel dug her nails into Nicolotto’s back and bit his shoulder. He winced but never stopped thrusting. The pleasure was worth the pain. As his thrusts became erratic and his breathing quickened, he planned to pull out. He was conscious of the possible outcome and didn’t want Rapunzel to regret giving in to her passions.

Rapunzel had different plans. She had talked to some of her partners about what it was like to be with a man. She asked them to describe every detail. While she had been penetrated many times by her marble toy, either in solo sessions or with a partner, it was just a toy. The marble was hard and gave her pleasure but it was cold and lifeless. She wanted to experience a man cumming inside her. She wanted to know what it was like to have him throbbing while he filled her. Before Nicolotto could pull away, Rapunzel wrapped her legs around him and trapped him.

“I want to feel it. I want you to cum inside me.”

She pulled him in for a final kiss and moaned into his mouth as he gave in to her wish. When he rolled onto his back to catch his breath and try to figure out what to say, Rapunzel took his cock in her mouth. As soon as he was hard, she mounted him. She didn’t need an apology or an explanation, she just needed him…

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Erotica
Fairy Tale Retelling
LGBTQ
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