avatarMichael Williams

Summary

The narrative concludes with Rapunzel's son, Letus, avenging his mother by killing Galitia, freeing Nicolosa (formerly Nicolotto), and reconciling his parents' relationship, which includes unconventional desires.

Abstract

The final episode of the "Rapunzel" retelling reveals the climax of a long-standing vendetta between Galitia, an ageless sorceress, and Rapunzel, whose golden hair symbolizes her role in Galitia's downfall. Nearly two decades after Rapunzel's escape with Nicolotto, their son Letus, bearing his mother's protective hair and armor, confronts Galitia, ending her life and freeing Nicolosa, who had been trapped in a submissive role. The story concludes with Letus facilitating the reunion and acceptance of his parents' complex sexual desires, including Nicolosa's transformation and submission to Rapunzel's dominance, reflecting themes of identity, liberation, and the fulfillment of one's true self.

Opinions

  • Rapunzel's maternal instincts and protective nature are evident as she prepares her son for the confrontation with Galitia, symbolized by cutting her hair.
  • The narrative suggests a critique of societal norms regarding sexuality and gender roles, particularly through the characters of Nicolosa and Galitia.
  • Letus's character arc reflects a journey from vengeance to understanding, as he comes to terms with his father's true identity and desires.
  • The story implies that true happiness comes from embracing one's desires and being true to oneself, as seen in the relationship dynamics between Rapunzel, Nicolotto/Nicolosa, and Letus.
  • The theme of transformation is central, not only in the physical sense but also in the emotional and psychological evolution of the characters.
  • The author may be advocating for open communication about intimate desires, as demonstrated by Rapunzel's willingness to understand and fulfill Nicolosa's needs.
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Final Episode

Rapunzel — Confusion

Part 6: Please leave. Make an old woman happy and just go…

Galitia made a deal with a fallen angel … If she cursed a babe each year, then she would not age. The child would grow to cause destruction in the world. However, she had been warned that on her 200th year, a golden-haired child would be born who would lead to her own downfall. Rapunzel is that child. Galitia feels all that Rapunzel does…

Catch up here…

Just shy of twenty years had passed since Nicolotto facilitated Rapunzel’s escape. Not a day went by when she didn’t think of him, mainly because their son reminded her so much of his father.

Shortly after escaping, Rapunzel thought of going back to face Galitia but every morning, she felt sick. The women of her new village explained morning sickness to her and she had to change her plan. She couldn’t risk the life of her child in a confrontation. She took on the role of teacher and musical instructor to the village children as well as her own and settled in to a quiet life, always fearing that Galitia had killed Nicolotto.

She always told Letus about his heroic father. About how he was able to trick a sorceress and how he freed her. She was honest that she did not know his fate. One night at dinner, he spoke his mind.

“Mother, I must go back to your village and learn Nicolotto’s fate. I must know what happened to my father.”

Rapunzel knew this day would come and she too had thought about it many times. Without a word, she opened a small trunk, pulled out a sword, and sliced off her long golden hair.

“What are you doing?” Letus asked. He knew how his mother prized her hair.

“This will protect you as it protected me.” She said as she handed him her golden locks. “Take this as well.”

The next morning, with a sword in hand and golden armor tucked under his clothes, covering his arms and legs, he left to learn his father’s fate. Rapunzel was able to tell him the exact route she used to flee and he followed it in reverse. At each stop, he learned more about the woman who never aged. He also learned that she had replaced Rapunzel with another woman in the tower but there was no word of his father.

Letus spent two days in town observing the manor. It seemed as though no one ever went in or out. Hardly any activity could be observed at all. On his third day in town, he saw a man pushing a cart toward Galitia’s home. He hid himself as Galitia took the food delivery.

She did exist and he would question her. Shortly after she took the food delivery, she went to the tower. From the people in town, he had learned how the balcony had been walled off. He knew from his mother that the stairwell had no windows. If he could get over the manor gate, Galitia would be unable to see him as long as he got to the tower door before she was upstairs and even then she would have to be looking out the window to see him.

He quickly scaled the gate, took a quick look around once he was inside the wall, and ran for the tower door. Finding the door unlocked, he waited. If she was just making a quick visit, he could surprise her and confront her when she exited. If she intended to stay in the tower for a time, he wanted to make sure she was no longer on the staircase when he entered.

Upon closing the door behind him, he took his time climbing the stairs. They were just as his mother had described as was the door with the peephole. Letus didn’t even need to look in to have a clear view of what was happening behind the door. The words echoing off the stone walls from the two women inside painted a picture. One woman was promising to be a good girl while the other demanded subjection. They were both enjoying the sex they were having just in very different ways.

Letus had to see with his own eyes. He slowly slid the cover away and looked through the peephole. Galitia was behind her lover. She had her bent down on the bed and was crashing into her as her lover cried for more. The way the submissive woman’s ass jiggled in her panties each time Galitia thrust made Letus hard.

“Fuck. I can’t help it. I’m going to cum.”

The slaps on the submissive’s butt didn’t stop her from cumming. In fact, she may have cum harder.

“Don’t move. And keep this in place.” Galitia demanded as she slid the dildo out of her pussy.

Letus fished his cock out of his pants and started to stroke himself. He didn’t have a perfect view but he could tell the submissive had a dildo hanging out of her and she was expected to keep it there while she ate Galitia’s pussy.

Galitia grabbed her lover’s long hair and held her face tight against her pussy as she instructed her exactly how she wanted to be pleased. After cumming all over the submissive’s face, Galitia returned to her position behind her, slipped the dildo back in her pussy, and began to fuck her hard and fast.

“Who’s my little sissy slut?”

“I am.”

“Are you going to cum while I fuck you?”

“Of course. You know I always cum for you.”

“Hands behind your back. I want you to cum just from me fucking you. No touching yourself.”

“Anything you ask.”

Letus couldn’t take it anymore. He needed to cum but couldn’t leave any evidence behind so he quickly shoved his cock back in his pants before giving it a few final strokes, bringing himself to climax just as the submissive reached her own.

He quickly but quietly went down the stairs and raced to get over the manor walls. All he could think about was the submissive. She was the perfect woman. He had been involved with several women from his village but every time he talked to them about his desire to dominate every aspect of their sex lives, they shied away. A few tried to play along but, in the end, they could not submit the way he desired. He was always searching for a woman like Galitia’s.

As Letus drank wine at the tavern, he got sloppy. His feet got tangled in his chair as he stood up and he ended up sprawled out on the floor. An elderly woman moved quickly towards him, helped him up, and whispered, “Come with me.”

She led him carefully down the street until they ducked behind a building.

“Woman, what are you doing.” He huffed as she rolled up his sleeve.

“Shut up and stay still.”

She didn’t back down for a moment although she was clearly frail in her old age. As she moved his arm into the moonlight, she knew.

“Only one has hair as golden as the sun. How do you know Rapunzel?” She whispered.

“She is my mother.”

“Keep quiet.” She insisted as she looked over her shoulder.

“Who are you and how do you know my mother?”

“My name is Letty. She and I were acquainted many years ago.”

“The Letty who taught her to follow her heart and never worry about what others think.”

“Is that what she said about me?”

“She still says it. In fact, she named me Letus in your honor.”

“My dear Rapunzel. Is she well?”

“She is. I am here to confront Galitia about my father. We must know what has happened to him. Do you know?”

“I heard many rumors but no one truly knows. I must warn you, do not confront Galitia.”

“Why?”

“Even after nearly two decades, she still seeks information about your mother. She is still obsessed about her. You will find there is a bounty out for her return. The less Galitia knows, the better. Leave town tonight and never return.”

“I must know.”

“Please leave. Make an old woman happy and just go.”

Letus rolled down his sleeve, hiding his golden armor once more. Letty could see her warning was falling on deaf ears. She would not stay to watch the outcome.

All night, Letus fumed. How could Galitia still want to enslave his mother. She had done her no harm since she left. He knew his mother would never be safe while Galitia lived. He also knew exactly how he wanted to defeat her.

The next morning, he scaled the manor wall just after Galitia entered the tower. He again waited until the two lovers were in the throes of passion but this time, instead of watching, he burst in the door. With his left arm in a defensive position and the sword in his right hand, he raced toward Galitia.

“Stop where you are and drop your weapon.”

Galitia’s words met Rapunzel’s hair and faded into the wind. Her command had no effect. Before she could physically defend herself, she was run through. A single well-placed blow ended her life instantly.

The submissive woman was trembling, her body laid out on the bed but she had seen it all from over her shoulder. She was wearing only her panties and the toy was still inside her.

Letus reached out to comfort her but she screamed and pulled away. Letus was shocked when she rolled over and he saw a bulge in her panties and her flat chest.

“Don’t hurt me.”

“I am here to claim you.”

“Who are you?” Nicolosa whimpered as she pulled away again.

“Letus. I am Rapunzel’s son and this monster was a threat to her as long as she lived.”

“Rapunzel?”

As Letus moved, a sliver of light came through the window and fell on Rapunzel’s hair. The entire room lit up as if they were outside.

“Rapunzel.” Nicolosa whispered again and again.

“Who are you?” Letus asked.

“Nicolosa.”

“You mean Nicolotto?”

“Nicolosa.”

“Nicolosa was the name you used to trick Galitia. Your name is Nicolotto. You saved Rapunzel. You saved my mother.”

Nicolosa’s fog slowly cleared. For years the only person she ever thought about was Galitia. Seeing Rapunzel’s hair was helping him remember. No one could forget her golden hair.

“We must leave and quickly.”

“Why?”

“I do not know what curses Galitia placed on this home or this town. The sooner we leave, the better.”

“I… I…”

“Get dressed.”

The commanding tone in Letus’ voice made Nicolotto jump up. He ran across the room and pulled a dress over his head.

“Where are…”

Letus stopped in his tracks. His father had instantly transformed again.

“Where are your clothes?”

“These are my clothes.”

“We will worry about it later. Let’s go.”

Nicolotto grabbed one personal item and stashed it in a bag while Letus was checking the stairwell for activity. They stopped only briefly to purchase men’s clothes and never stayed in one place for long until they reached Rapunzel’s home.

“Letus! Nicolotto!”

Rapunzel pulled both men into her arms and kissed them as tears ran down her face. She made Letus tell her everything about what happened while Nicolotto rested. Letus left out as many details as he could, trying to spare her from the state he discovered his father in.

Letus stayed with his parents for a few days before returning to his own home. It was much closer to the mill where he worked.

Rapunzel was happy for the privacy. She had plans to thank Nicolotto for freeing her and she had twenty years of love-making to catch up on.

A month later, Rapunzel showed up unexpectedly at Letus’ home. She was clearly distraught as he offered her a seat.

“Mother, what’s wrong?”

“I shouldn’t bother you. I’ll just go.”

“Mother, please. I know it’s been overwhelming; it has been for me as well but we have always been here for each other. Tell me.”

“I need to know more about when you saved your father.”

“What do you need to know?”

“It’s something that has come up recently.”

“Again, whatever it is, we can talk about it.”

“Your father and I have reconnected intimately, we did almost as soon as he was home.”

“That’s great.”

“It was but a few days ago, he brought something up.”

Letus was trying not to let on how annoyed he was. He hated when someone danced around what they wanted or needed to say. He tried to be patient with his mother.

“When the two of you escaped, he brought a sex toy with him. I know it well. I used it with some of my female lovers when I was a prisoner in the tower.”

“Okay.”

“Your father wants me to use it on him. He said he wants to be my good girl and my sissy slut.”

Letus pretended to be shocked but he wasn’t. His father seemed very happy with Galitia.

“I’m the first to tell someone to pursue their consensual desires. I don’t want to deny your father but I’m not sure if I can fulfill this wish. It is not a fantasy I can get into but I want to please him.”

“What does he say?”

“He asked me to try it and I did but I know I didn’t give him what he needed. He was left needing more. Do you have any idea what he wants or needs?”

Letus took a deep breath before he told his mother everything he knew about Galitia and Nicolosa’s relationship. He apologized for not telling her before but he didn’t want to embarrass his father during such an emotional time.

“Thank you for talking with me.” Rapunzel said as she stood up. “Maybe I will try again now that I have a better idea what he needs.”

It was a week or so later when Letus was stopping by for an unannounced visit. Before he could even knock on the door, he heard his mother crying, apologizing for not being able to satisfy his father. His father was telling her it was okay but he could hear the strain in both their voices. He left without ever letting them know he was there.

The next day, Nicolotto found a note in the house.

Be a good girl and put on a pretty dress and your sexy panties. I’m going to give you exactly what you deserve. I want your face down on the bed, eyes closed.

Nicolotto was so excited by the note, he never questioned it. He just rushed to the bedroom, stripped, put on his panties and grabbed one of Rapunzel’s dresses. He was ready to prove just how dirty of a girl he could be for her.

When the door to the house opened, Nicolosa’s panties got wet. She closed her eyes as her arousal grew. It took her a second to notice that the steps approaching the bedroom were heavy. When she heard the rustling of a belt, she gasped. When the bottle of oil was opened, she knew she was going to get fucked.

“I followed all your instructions, just like a good girl.”

Not a word was said as Nicolosa’s dress was lifted, exposing her ass. She moaned as a hand held her steady while something slid through the slit in the back of her panties. There was just the slightest pressure against her ass when she heard, “Are you willing to be my sissy slut?”

The familiar baritone voice made Nicolosa tremble. She knew the voice but she never second guessed her decision as she replied, “Yes. Make me your sissy slut.” Her ass was spread in a way she had never experienced. The warm flesh inside her was soft yet hard at the same time. As her new dom grunted, she felt a spasm in her ass. Gone was the cold stone. The cock in her ass was so much better. As the thrusts got harder and faster, Nicolosa thought back to Rapunzel’s words from long ago, “I want to feel it. I want you to cum inside me.” Nicolosa started to cum herself when the first splash of cum filled her ass.

“Remain face down until I leave and if you’re a good girl and never tell anyone about this, I’ll come back later this week to fuck your ass again like the good little slut you are.”

“I’ll never tell.” Nicolosa said as cum started to run down her thigh. When she was alone again, she got changed quickly, hid any evidence of the sexual encounter, and greeted Rapunzel with a rock hard erection as soon as she walked in the door. He needed to make love to the woman who gave him everything he ever needed.

THE END

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