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Summary

In "ARC OF THE IMMORTALS/ Book 1 — Part 2," the narrative follows the intertwined lives of Touzdae and Jac, as they navigate complex timelines, near-death experiences, and a plan to reclaim the Fish from antagonists, all while dealing with personal loss and the intricacies of time-space travel.

Abstract

The story delves into the emotional and physical journey of young Touzdae, who is deeply affected by the loss of her mafa, and elder observer Touzdae, who supports her through channeled unconditional love. Meanwhile, Jac, who has a close connection with Touzdae, tests a space drive that nearly costs Touzdae her life, leading to tension between them. Despite this, they work towards a shared goal of boarding the Fish to confront Bendel and the Genetics League. The narrative is punctuated by moments of reflection, apology, and the unveiling of a complex plan that involves the enigmatic Well of Souls and its paradox rings. The characters grapple with their mistakes, personal responsibilities, and the multiverse's vast possibilities, all while maintaining a sense of humor and camaraderie.

Opinions

  • Touzdae is portrayed as emotionally vulnerable yet resilient, expressing fury at Jac's reckless actions and mourning the loss of her mafa.
  • Jac is characterized as well-intentioned but occasionally inept, as seen in his convoluted apology and his testing of the fast light drive without fully considering the risks.
  • The relationship between Touzdae and Jac is complex, involving love, frustration, and a shared commitment to their mission.
  • The narrative suggests a level of acceptance for human error, as Touzdae reflects on Jac's apology and acknowledges her own part in her mafa's death.
  • Phorae's role as a mediator and confidant provides a stabilizing presence amidst the interpersonal drama, offering support and information to Touzdae.
  • The plan to retake the Fish is viewed as sound by Touzdae, despite her reservations about the risks involved, particularly her role near the paradox rings.
  • The story hints at the possibility of the mafa's survival or existence in another form, as suggested by her planned disappearance to the Emmons Sisterhood.
  • The use of humor, as seen in Touzdae's reaction to Jac's apology, adds a layer of lightheartedness to the otherwise intense and emotionally charged narrative.

ARC OF THE IMMORTALS/ Book 1 — Part 2

Pursuit: 39/ Admission in Writing And…

Recap: Young Touzdae longs to save her mafa. Elder observer Touzdae blends consciousness with the younger and holds her in channeled unconditional love.

The Well of Souls in One of It’s Many Manifestations | Image by Peace,love,happiness from Pixabay

Recap continued: Von Deign’s soldiers attempt to kill the pair of young Touzdae and Hannah. Force fields created by Hanna short out when fired upon and kill young Touzdae’s mafa in half-life. Hannah bi-locates herself and young Touzdae to the spaceship under the sand dune.

Observer Touzdae goes to Touzdae after the Levelz disaster. While asleep, two Entu monks take Jac’s dead body to the Well of Souls, a staff member tells young Touzdae.

Jac felt Touzdae’s return while he was aboard the Needlecraft. He decided to take a brief jump to the Well of Souls. Time-space 100 years in the future, so as not to interfere with the timeline from whence they came.

The ship performed without error. He jumped in using the folding space drive (FSD) to the outer edge of the Well. He jumped near the paradox rings of the Well and out immediately. A few minutes later back to the orbit around the 5th planet in the Antarian Beta system.

Touzdae emerged from the tunnel at the core of the engine.

“What the hell were you doing?” She was furious.

“Testing the jump drive,” Jac said innocently.

“You nearly killed me. If I hadn’t been in the med cryo chamber I would have been dead!”

“Sorry,” he said.

She brushed passed him. “I’m going below,” she said and found the hatch that led to the stores of the Fish.

“There is no below. This is the Needlecraft, not the Fish.”

She opened the hatch and slammed it shut.

“Are we in the docking bay?”

“Uh-huh. Yeah.”

“The enclosed docking bay of Phorae’s station?”

“That’s right.”

She opened the canopy and climbed out.

There was a note on the outside of the door where she stayed when she jumped to wherever. It read:

DON’T

He wrote a note:

“I apologize. Please let me know if you accept it or not. It won’t happen again. Love, Jac.” He slipped it under the door.

He had more testing to do. The timing to leave for Fish was getting smaller. He wanted to let Touzdae know what he had planned, and what she thought of the plan.

I made a mistake. Am I not allowed to make mistakes? What happened to her out there? Clearly, she is upset by events out there. She’s in pain. I wish I could help, he thought.

“Enough,” he said to himself. There’s more testing needed. “It’s clear, she can take all the time she needs. We can go, or I can go if she doesn’t want to at any time. we can pick the time we go. There’s all the time in the multiverse.”

Back to work, he thought.

“Geordae, do you know where Jac is?” Touzdae asked.

“He went out to test the tubular fast light drive. He said he would be back in about 8 hours, that was 4 hours ago,” Phorae said. (It was the fast — close to light speed/faster than light speed drive that everyone in three galaxies used.

“Thanks,” she was carrying the e-pad that Jac had left for her. Phorae was relieved that she had it. He hadn’t wanted to tell her about it, as Jac had asked him. Best to stay out of these kinds of disagreements, he thought.

“He also said that he would inform Control if delayed.”

Jac had trouble balancing the fast light drive after a four-hour top-speed run. It made him laugh. “Because it reminds me of the Fish’s asynchronous weave that I was occasionally adjusting. Maybe I play, played some part in that. Humph.”

Touzdae read Jac’s laborious and convoluted apology. She laughed at it and she cried some too. “He’s no writer,” she said amused. She sat with his verbose apology. The emotion of his deep love and occasional ineptitude came through. It made her smile.

And there was more. It was an outline of a plan to board the Fish and take it back from Bendel, Harry, and the Genetics League. She didn’t like the plan although it was a sound plan. “I don’t like that my part is hovering near the rings of paradox in the Well. That needs some fixing.”

“My chef is making a vegetable stew, and Control said Jac could be up to two hours late. Join me for dinner?” Phorae asked. She nodded “Yes”.

Later Jac wandered back to their suite, dirty and exhausted. He showered and fell into bed, not realizing that Touzdae was there. In the morning they talked. He heard about her ordeal and she felt partially responsible for her mafa’s death.

“That’s a hell of a lot to endure. How do you feel now?”

“Raw.”

“Hmm.”

“What?”

“This might not mean anything.”

“What? What!?”

“Your mafa said something around her 570,000 Birth-Anniversary Remembrance. It was around the time you and I were getting serious.”

“What?”

“That she was planning to disappear. She was going to take refuge with the Emmons Sisterhood on the sacred moon.”

“Spirits, what a memory you have!”

“Is that a good thing?” Jac asked.

“Yes. But how could she be in two places at once?”

“I don’t know, but it’s worth checking out, right?”

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If you want to catch-up on any chapters you missed in part 2 [Part 2 contains link for contents of part 1]:

Thank you for joining me in the adventures that span lifetimes and worlds. Blessings on your journeys and odysseys. (If you do NOT wish to be tagged, let me know, and I’ll tag you not):

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