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Summary

In "ARC OF THE IMMORTALS/ Book 1: Pursuit: 16 / Jac Who?", Pursuer-Jac grapples with traumatic memories and a longing for peace, ultimately freeing himself from an internal targeting device and experiencing a profound connection with Touzdae, while she completes her mission aboard The Mu.

Abstract

"ARC OF THE IMMORTALS/ Book 1: Pursuit: 16 / Jac Who?" delves into the psychological turmoil of Pursuer-Jac, who is haunted by memories of conflict and trauma. He is tormented by flashbacks that blur the line between himself and his enemy, Jac Kritos. Amidst the ruins of La Maz of Gata, he relives Jac's memories of destruction. Despite his internal struggle, he finds a moment of tranquility with Touzdae at a hot springs pool, where they share a telepathic connection. Meanwhile, Touzdae is on a mission to hide the Lingham Stone on The Mu, an Atlantean Spaceship. She uses her wit and laz gun to navigate the ship's secure areas. As Pursuer-Jac confronts his own existence, he separates from Jac's body and comes to terms with his invisibility to others. The chapter concludes with Pursuer-Jac's desperate call for the other Jac to manifest, reflecting his desire for closure and confrontation.

Opinions

  • Pursuer-Jac expresses a deep-seated desire for an adversarial conflict and is dissatisfied with the absence of a new target.
  • He questions whether he is becoming his enemy, indicating a crisis of identity and a struggle with his own sense of self.
  • Pursuer-Jac experiences a profound sense of peace and acceptance in the presence of Touzdae, suggesting a meaningful connection between the characters.
  • The internal targeting device is seen as a burden to Pursuer-Jac, and its removal brings him relief and a sense of freedom.
  • Touzdae's character is portrayed as resourceful and determined, as she cleverly bypasses security to fulfill her mission.
  • The narrative conveys a theme of ownership and autonomy, emphasizing that "Nobody owns anybody."
  • Pursuer-Jac's invisibility is a source of isolation, yet he also sees it as a form of liberation from the physical realm.
  • The chapter ends with an intense emotional plea from Pursuer-Jac, revealing his unresolved issues with the deceased Jac Kritos.

ARC OF THE IMMORTALS/ Book 1

Pursuit: 16 / Jac Who?

Recap: Pursuer-Jac longed to deal Jac a death with pain and suffering.

(some scenes/memories of trauma)

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He missed the adversarial conflict. There was no new target in sight. Touzdae’s repressed memories from the Well of the Souls came to the surface through a barrage of images of her under attack from the forces of nature. She reached the enormous Atlantean Spaceship — The Mu. It was her mission to hide the Lingham Stone in a safe place aboard the giant ship.

Pursuer-Jac walked through the decimated stillness of La Maz of Gata. He was shocked by Jac Kritos’ memories of columns and the surrounding cliffs collapsing onto him and crushing to the ground of La Maz. The surroundings remained fixed in time, as if he were experiencing a snapshot of history.

Where are these experiences? Where are these flashbacks coming from? Am I becoming my enemy? Does he haunt me from the bardos beyond death? Pursuer Jac’s questions snapped at him like a rabid dog on the loose. I’m sick of it. When do I find peace?

Memories of the beauteous young woman, he plopped down beside her by “accident” at the hot springs pool. When she turned over and faced him both of them in a prone position, something happened. It was inexplicable.

I feel at peace with you and accepted, he thought.

“I feel the same way,” Touzdae whispered, having heard his thoughts.

The mechanized device in his head clicked on, searching for a target. He was ejected from the memory. I don’t want this targeting device in me anymore, he thought.

“Get out of me,” he yelled at himself. A soup of slimy fluids dripped off his face. Small metal parts fell out of his head. He looked at the pile of goop and sighed deeply. Relieved. I am freed, he thought.

“Bring that planet to me, or I am at that planet,” P-Jac said aloud, and he was there. He thought of the young woman. She was there as before.

“What did you say your name was?” he asked her.

“I — I never said,” she uttered, awestruck.

“Hey, punk, are you stealing my woman?” Bendel called out.

“Nobody owns anybody,” P-Jac said and turned.

“Oh Jac, it’s you,” Bendel was aghast.

Touzdae garbed as an Emmons Sister with a crone’s face used her sense to find a place to hide the Lingham Stone.

A guard stopped her.

“Sister Emmons, you are not allowed beyond this point,” the guard ordered.

“Young man,” Touzdae’s voice was that of an ancient one. He nodded with deference. “Let me pass. I am on a mission.”

“This is a dangerous area of the ship. Let me call an armed escort for you,” he looked toward her, careful not to make eye contact.

She swung her robes aside for a moment, revealing her laz gun. “As you can see, young man, I am armed.”

“Sorry, sorry… Go,” he stepped aside gesturing.

She hurried along.

Back on the planet where he met her. The One, he thought. P-Jac stood and removed himself from Jac’s body. He soon knew that he was invisible to the others, as he had always been. Bendel, you are a slime thing, he thought.

He stood in the frozen time of the Levelz and La Maz, the memories of Jac and her in his head and in his heart. But she was coupled with Bendel then and Jac now.

“I want the other Jac, here, in front of me now. I don’t care if you’re dead. Show yourself,” He yelled out and upward.

Blink. This is a hateful place, he thought as he stood in a 30 foot long tube sandwiched between the rocks on that planetoid’s beach at the edge of space.

“Take me anywhere but here!” he shouted at the transparent solar panel at the cloud of stellar dust. “This must be the far edge of Gata,” he whispered.

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