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Sara K. Vogeler's "Poem #12 —Odysseus, the Sperm and the Egg" is a poetic exploration of human fertilization, drawing parallels between the journey of sperm to the egg and the mythological journey of Odysseus.

Abstract

"Poem #12 —Odysseus, the Sperm and the Egg" by Sara K. Vogeler is a profound piece that metaphorically compares the epic journey of sperm to fertilize an egg with the mythic odyssey of Odysseus. The poem, inspired by a lecture on fertilization and dedicated to the author's mentor, Bonnie Bainbridge Cohen, uses rich imagery to describe the sperm's perilous journey through the uterine environment, likened to the mythical challenges faced by Odysseus. It culminates in the successful fertilization of the egg, symbolizing the beginning of life and the merging of genetic material. The poem also touches on the concept of destiny and the selection process inherent in the fertilization process, as well as the transformative moment when life begins. Vogeler's work is featured in her Poetry Portal, which aims to bring poetic creations to a wider audience, and is accompanied by an introduction and reflection by Lewis Harrison on the nature and impact of poetry.

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  • The author, Sara K. Vogeler, views the process of fertilization with a sense of wonder and profound connection to mythology, suggesting a reverence for the complexity and beauty of life's beginnings.
  • Lewis Harrison expresses a deep appreciation for poetry's ability to evoke emotion and meaning beyond intellectual understanding, emphasizing the importance of rhythm and meter in poetic expression.
  • The poem's comparison of sperm and Odysseus implies a belief in the heroic nature of the biological process of fertilization.
  • The author acknowledges the significance of the mentor-mentee relationship, dedicating the poem to Bonnie Bainbridge Cohen, indicating the influence of guidance and knowledge in creative endeavors.
  • Harrison's initiative to create a Poetry Portal on Medium.com reflects an opinion that talented poets deserve a broader audience and that their work should be more widely recognized and appreciated.

Poem #12 —Odysseus, the Sperm and the Egg

By Sara K. Vogeler — From my Poetry Portal

A Poem on the flow of life — Photo by Sigmund on Unsplash

— to my mentor of 50 years, Bonnie Bainbridge Cohen

drawn from the video:

Watching the East River

while teaching about our beginnings

I see how the sperm swim north

through the alkaline darkness

of the uterine wall

urged by hormonal secretions

past Scylla and Charybdis

who guard the cervix

towards the crown of light,

the Corona Radiata,

that illuminates the way

to the secondary oocyte

waiting to be touched,

in about 30 minutes.

The sailors who survive

(only 150 out of two hundred million)

follow the tide into the fundus

through the oviduct to the ampulla (the flask)

filled with holy water

where fertilization takes place

as the egg

has ripened and ruptured

from the Graafian follicle

and now waits for Odysseus

to arrive in time —

within 48 hours.

He is the only one

selected to enter the chamber,

by his wife Penelope

who has “scensed” him,

who has picked him

from all the others,

who has known who

he would be before

he was born and has waited

an eternity

for this moment

to come.

He bows his head

to be cleansed —

removing his cholesterol crown

before speeding

to the ZP3 receptors.

and kisses her as

she lifts her skirt —

the zona pellucida

around the egg —

so he alone can tunnel

into a whole universe

that has been

waiting 40,000 years

for the human dance to begin.

Kissed by Odysseus,

the secondary oocyte

completes meiosis.

She allows his numbers

to slide into her deepest self

to be joined together —

23 becomes 46

chromosomes and life begins.

The mitochondria disintegrate

that propelled the sperm,

(like the oars of Homer’s Galley).

There’s no turning back

as the sodium ions

close the membrane

to the others —

the 149 suitors who will

never reach Olympia.

In support, the suitors

drum on the conceptus

to make it stronger,

to protect it

with their heads

pointing into the oocyte

and send it spinning

through the Aegean Sea

of the uterus

swimming madly,

to help bury their future

in the uterine lining.

2 to 4 to 8 to 32 cells —

zygote to morula to blastocyst —

where the trophoblast and embryoblast

give meaning to what becomes

Telemachus, the son of their union,

who will be born

“far from the battle”

as his name implies

at 9 1/2 months.

The centrosome

directs the

microtubules

into sets of 3’s

with two centrioles on either end

that help generate the spindle fibers

that separate the chromosomes

along the equator to make

elegant genetic constellations

of DNA, our stored personal experience

on earth, over 400 billion years old

suspended in the galaxy

where stories of survival

become coded into stars.

Odysseus with Penelope,

once guided by the polar body,

have found themselves at home

at last, through Ursa Major

way past the fallopian tubes

into the fourth dimension

where there is only Space

and the Now

and soon,

their little one.

Author: Sara K. Vogeler started writing again after moving to a quiet apartment on the East River in New York City. She incorporated her writing into her dancing, and now into her hands-on therapies as a Master Somatic Movement Educator and Therapist. Check out her website and her 8-wk seminar on natural pain relief at https://www.TheNeuroMuscularCenter.com.

The Takeaway by Lewis Harrison “Ask Lewis”

I love writing and reading poems. Poetry bypasses my left brain intellect, and connects that part of me that seeks meaning, rhythm, emotional resonance, and literary texture.

For me, the best poetry has a natural richness of meter, intonation, and rhythm.

Many readers of poetry, aren’t aware of the fact that rhythm and meter are different, though closely related. Meter brings the definitive pattern established for a verse, while rhythm is the actual sound that comes from poetic words, and phrases.

I have many friends and associates, who write wonderful poetry. Usually, they drop their creations into a Facebook post where it is likely to be noticed by less than 25 people. I have decided to create a Poetry Portal in a number of wonderful publications on Medium.com. Here I have gotten permission from my poet friends and associates to repost the writings of these gifted creators.

Here is an introduction to this series of poems.

Poetry
Poem
Conception
Odysseus
Creativity
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