Summary

Rahbeem Roth navigates the challenges of his new role as a guidance counselor at a unique "Magic School," where he encounters extraordinary students with supernatural issues, including a demon hunter and a child star grappling with necromancy.

Abstract

Set within the fantastical B.Lucky World Theme Park, the narrative unfolds with Rahbeem Roth, the newly appointed guidance counselor at America's first official "Magic School." Here, he confronts the peculiar dilemmas of his magical students, such as a Black Power demon hunter and a child star named Little Vegas, who attempts to resurrect his deceased girlfriend. The story takes a dark turn as Little Vegas finds himself drowning in the theme park's lagoon, with only the enigmatic figure of Kaye Beltran nearby. As Little Vegas struggles for air, Kaye's intervention unleashes a blinding light, leaving the fate of the boy and the nature of the school's magic open to interpretation.

Opinions

The author presents a unique blend of genres, combining paranormal, action, and comedy elements within a script format.
The narrative suggests an underlying theme of the struggles of adolescence, amplified by the addition of magical elements.
The character of Kaye Beltran is portrayed as a potentially powerful figure, whose actions and intentions remain mysterious.
The story invites readers to reflect on the consequences of meddling with dark forces, as seen in Little Vegas's desperate attempt to bring back his girlfriend from the dead.
The author encourages reader engagement by providing links to subsequent parts of the story and a call to subscribe for updates.
There is a direct appeal to the audience to support the author through membership and tips, highlighting the value of reader support in the creation of new content.

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Fiction / Paraormal-Action-Comedy /Script form

Rahbeem Roth just got a job as the guidance counselor at America’s first official “Magic School.” Now he’s helping all kinds of magical teenagers with some real-world problems, including a Black Power demon hunter, and a child star trying to bring his girlfriend back from the dead…

EXT. B.LUCKY WORLD THEME PARK — DAY

A few children run around what looks like a giant lagoon but it’s a manmade pool of water. One Child has a balloon shaped like the theme parks mascot “B.Lucky.”

At the far end of the pool is a giant replica of an Aztec temple with a water slide coming out of the open mouth of it.

We’re looking at the children’s legs as they run past an ominous figure whose legs are draped in all black and is slowly marching towards the pool. Those legs stop right at the pools edge as if the figure is looking into the water.

INT. THE LAGOON — SAME

Soft music starts to play as we see the man dressed in all black, KAYE BELTRAN, from the inside of the lagoon.

His figure quivers as we’re looking at him through the water. Then his shape is broken up by bubbles rising.

As the camera sinks down it passes four boys who are floating, looking unconscious in the water.

LITTLE VEGAS, a boy of about 11 years old, opens his eyes and realizes he’s drowning. He immediately starts flailing in a panic trying to swim up to air but no matter how hard he tries he can’t make it.

DISSOLVE TO BLACK.

FADE IN.

Still in the water, Little Vegas wakes up again. The music grows even slower and more warped.

From Little Vegas’ POV we see the quivering, watery image of KAYE BELTRAN again. Now he’s crouching at the edge of the pool, observing all the boys who are drowning.

Little Vegas reaches out and yells to Kaye for help but only air bubbles come out as he continues to go down, into the darkness of the water.

In a last ditch effort Little Vegas reaches out with all that’s left in him as Kaye reaches towards him.

A bright light explodes from Kayes’ hand and the entire pool explodes in pure light. Everything else fades to white, including Little Vegas.

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