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Summary

The article discusses the appropriateness of writers breaking the fourth wall and the importance of maintaining the illusion of the craft for readers who are not interested in the behind-the-scenes aspects of writing and publishing.

Abstract

The author of the article, addressed to writers, explores the concept of breaking the fourth wall in writing. The article suggests that while writers may be proud of their craft and the work that goes into producing a piece of writing, the majority of readers are not interested in the technicalities, contract negotiations, editing processes, or financial aspects of writing. Instead, readers seek the magic of the narrative without the distraction of its creation. The author points out the prevalence of articles on Medium about making money from writing and questions whether this content aligns with what readers want. The article calls for writers to focus on delivering the show that readers expect, without exposing the backstage mechanics of writing and publishing.

Opinions

  • Writers should be cautious about breaking the fourth wall, as it can detract from the reader's experience and interest.
  • The craft of writing should maintain an element of mystery, akin to a magician not revealing their tricks.
  • Readers, especially those not involved in writing, prefer to engage with the story or message without being exposed to the details of its creation.
  • The article criticizes the abundance of Medium articles focused on how to make money writing, suggesting this may not be the content most readers are seeking.
  • Writers are encouraged to craft a persona that aligns with readers' expectations and to leave the technical aspects of writing and publishing to discussions within the writing community.
  • The author implies that the primary audience on Medium might be aspiring writers looking for financial success rather than readers interested in diverse topics.
  • There is a call for writers to prioritize the love of the craft and the joy of sharing their work over the pursuit of monetary gain.

Navel-Gazing

Pay No Attention to the Man Behind the Curtain

When is it appropriate for writers to break the fourth wall? If you consider yourself a writer, read on. If you are here on Medium to read excellent writing on topics other than the craft of writing or how to get paid for your writing or how to earn a gazillion dollars writing for Medium — please don’t read this. Go read something, anything, else. Explore all the Topics Medium has to offer. Go read something that doesn’t have the word “Medium” or “$” or “How I Made Money Writing.” Go — LIVE! Enjoy.

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Are they gone? Just production crew left?

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Still with me?

There is a lot of work that goes on “backstage” to produce good entertainment. Those involved are rightfully proud of their work, but they don’t talk incessantly about it with those outside of their profession. They are aware that they are making magic, and only their fellow magicians want to know how the trick is done.

This is true for writers, too. Although “breaking the fourth wall” typically applies to stage and screen, it applies to writing, as well — when writers insert themselves between the words, the vision, or the message they’re trying to craft and the reader. “Hey, look at me! Let me draw attention to my commas and why I put them there!”

Sure, all writers are — or should be — avid readers. But, most readers who are not writers don’t care about all the stages of contract negotiations between authors, agents, and publishers. They don’t care about the details of editing — from acquisitions to copy — or book design, illustration, printing, and marketing. They like to believe the magic. They have an image in mind, and part of being a “famous author” or a “beloved author” (whether you are, or not), is to craft that persona that your readers want to meet — not to explain in excruciatingly boring detail how the trick is done.

There really ought to be a “backstage” for Medium writers. Leave the rest of the readers out in the dimly lit theatre, anticipating the rise of the velvet curtain. Then, dammit, give them the show they came for.

A quick Google search: site:medium.com (“how to” AND “make money” AND “on Medium”) yields 61,000+ results. Another search: site:medium.com (“how I made” AND “$” AND “on Medium”) yields over 74,000 results.

Is this the primary audience, then, on Medium? Would-be “writers” looking to make a quick buck? Sure, we writers have to eat — deserve to eat! — and who can blame a writer for looking for ways to earn money doing what we love to do? For those who do it for the love of the craft, and still crave nothing but free exposure, and are happy to beg, “Come, please, do me the favor of reading…” I leave you with Harlan Ellison:

But is this what our readers want to read about? Is this how we do it — right here, right now, in full view of all the readers we hope to attract, and entice into paying their $5/month in order that we might share in the revenue from their precious time spent reading?

Do you see any of the large publications — Cosmopolitan, National Geographic, Forbes, New York Times, The Atlantic, USA Today — any of them, publishing articles from their contributors on how to make a living writing from the same publication?

Writers, develop a little stage presence, please.

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