avatarAustin Briggman

Summary

The text describes a poignant moment of indecision and emotional turmoil as the narrator anticipates a potentially regrettable encounter with someone they are attracted to but know is not good for them.

Abstract

The narrative poem "Only Human" captures the internal struggle of the narrator upon the arrival of a woman who triggers feelings of being lost and the foreknowledge of a predictable, yet tempting, trap. As the evening progresses and the crowd thins, the woman is expected to make herself comfortable in the narrator's private space, signaling her intentions. The narrator is left to grapple with the decision of whether to succumb to the inevitable encounter, fully aware of the potential emotional pitfalls and the likelihood that resistance is futile. The tension builds as the narrator finishes their drink, contemplating the seductive yet dangerous prospect of giving in to the temptation, knowing that both parties are acutely aware of the dynamic at play.

Opinions

  • The narrator feels a sense of inevitability and resignation about the upcoming interaction with the woman.
  • There is a clear recognition of the potential for emotional harm, yet the attraction persists.
  • The woman's actions suggest a level of familiarity and comfort in initiating the encounter, indicating a pattern of behavior.
  • The narrator's internal conflict is palpable, torn between desire and the knowledge that this may be a repeated mistake.
  • The use of the woman putting on the narrator's shorts and waiting on the bed symbolizes a deep level of intimacy and the blurring of personal boundaries.
  • The narrator's hesitation, expressed through the act of finishing a drink, reflects a moment of contemplation and decision-making under the influence of emotions and possibly alcohol.
  • The repeated emphasis on knowing better but potentially giving in anyway hints at the complexity of human desires and the difficulty of resisting temptation despite negative consequences.

Only Human

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when she walks in

i feel lost

because i know

and she knows

after the drinks are empty

after the crowd has walked

out the door

shes going to go upstairs

go through my dresser

put on a pair of my shorts

sit on my bed

and wait

.

she’ll wait

as I finish my drink

for me to figure out

if i want to put myself into this trap

once again

even though

i know i shouldn’t

and she knows that

i know i shouldn’t

.

and she knows

she won’t have to wait

for very long

.

.

https://readmedium.com/they-said-it-on-the-news-ac44f735a776

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