avatarAimée Brown Gramblin

Summary

Savannah and Micah mutually agree to end their casual dating relationship, recognizing that while they enjoy each other's company, the romantic attraction isn't strong enough for either to feel it's a fulfilling relationship.

Abstract

In the microfiction presented, Savannah and Micah share a moment of honesty over dinner. Micah expresses his feelings, stating that although they have fun together, he lacks a strong attraction to Savannah. Savannah acknowledges similar feelings, valuing the companionship and reliability of their weekly dates, despite not feeling a strong romantic pull towards Micah. Micah, deciding not to lead Savannah on, gently ends their arrangement, suggesting they both deserve more meaningful connections. The story concludes with Savannah reflecting on the situation, considering that perhaps it is for the best.

Opinions

  • Micah believes in the importance of mutual attraction in a relationship and respects Savannah enough to end their dates rather than waste her time.
  • Savannah appreciates the consistency and safety of her relationship with Micah, but recognizes the lack of deeper romantic feelings.
  • Both characters show a level of maturity in their willingness to confront their true feelings and act accordingly, despite the potential discomfort of the conversation.
  • The author suggests that companionship, while comforting, should not be the sole basis for a romantic relationship, and that both parties should seek genuine attraction and emotional fulfillment.

One is The Loneliest Number

Microfiction

Image created by the author.

Savannah drags a french fry through Green Goddess salad dressing. She scrunches up her face and stares at Micah.

“What do you mean?”

“Look,” Micah’s voice trails off, “We like each other. We have fun. I’m just not that attracted to you. Don’t you feel the same way about me?”

Savannah does feel the same way, but it’s so nice to have a date every Friday night. Micah doesn’t make her heart flutter, but he’s safe. He’s handsome enough. He’s interesting.

“Sav, you’re a great girl and I don’t want to waste your time. You deserve better than this. We both do,” Micah says and kisses her cheek before walking away.

Savannah gazes out the window, drags another fry through salad dressing, and contemplates what just happened.

Maybe it is for the best…

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