avatarNona Nicklin

Summary

The poem "Ode to Unspoiled Fruit" reflects on the narrator's journey from youthful innocence to maternal empowerment, transcending the metaphorical and literal consumption of her 'fruit' by others.

Abstract

"Ode to Unspoiled Fruit" is a poignant piece entered in the Evolve November Poetry Competition, which uses fruit as a metaphor for the narrator's body and experiences. It begins with the narrator as a child, touched and bruised by someone who takes without giving, leaving marks on her youth. As she matures, her body develops, and she asserts ownership over herself, her breasts symbolizing both a personal treasure and a natural, nurturing bounty. The poem then transitions to the act of breastfeeding, a pure and life-giving process untainted by past intrusions. Finally, the narrator celebrates her body's capabilities and pleasures, likening her breasts to pendula and dirigibles, affirming her autonomy and the beauty of her form, untouched by the stain of past exploitations.

Opinions

  • The poem suggests that the narrator's early experiences were marked by a loss of innocence and autonomy over her body.
  • There is a clear transition from victimization to empowerment as the narrator grows and takes control over her own body.
  • The act of breastfeeding is presented as a sacred and untainted experience, contrasting with the earlier violations.
  • The narrator expresses pride and wonder in the capabilities and aesthetic beauty of her body.
  • The poem conveys a strong message of resilience and self-acceptance, emphasizing the importance of personal autonomy and the celebration of one's own body.

Ode to Unspoiled Fruit

Evolve November Poetry Competition

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I. Before I could write my name, I’d been plucked;

his thumb pressed peachy flesh that would not yield but bruised skin torn, still too young for juices dribbling down chins.

Like choice delights in grocers’ bins fingered for firmness, preferred to riper plumps, not an inch of me remained without some mark of him in handling

until

I swallowed the metaphor pit and all. Sampling done, he refused to pay and sped away.

II. Before I could tell my tale, breasts developed,

my own tender fruit, foreign to his intrusion, double swaths of skin and heft over which t-shirts stretched bold with lettering KEEP OFF

chaste ornaments mine to cup mine to bestow nature’s gift, unblemished bounty.

III. Before I could finish my passage, mouths fastened

to the tips to draw that which fattened cheeks lengthened limbs built my babies’ bones

no blight of him lay between baby’s nose and nuzzled breast.

IV. Before I seal my tribute, I celebrate

each sensation, shift and slide: pleasing pendula sloping toward bedsheets reclining against ribs suspended like upended dirigibles in my stoops to gather garden herbs and bulbs and fresh bouquets—

for they will never bear his stain.

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