Ode To Maggie

Summary

"Ode To Maggie" is a free verse poem by Lori Carlson that expresses a deep personal connection and gratitude to a growing tree, symbolizing the tree's role as a guardian of the speaker's secrets and treasures.

Abstract

The poem "Ode To Maggie" by Lori Carlson is a heartfelt tribute to a tree named Maggie, which has grown alongside the speaker from a small size to a towering presence. The speaker has a history of sharing secrets with Maggie since childhood, emphasizing the tree's significance as a confidant and protector. The act of burying treasures at the base of the tree without disturbing its roots illustrates a mutual respect and a symbiotic relationship. Maggie's gift of a single white blossom is seen as a token of love and acknowledgment of the bond they share. The poem reflects on themes of growth, trust, and the unspoken connection between humans and nature, with the tree serving as a symbol of steadfastness and wisdom. Carlson's work invites readers to appreciate the silent companionship and the unseen emotional support provided by the natural world.

Opinions

The speaker holds Maggie, the tree, in high regard, considering it a trusted keeper of personal secrets and fears.
There is a sense of wonder and appreciation for Maggie's growth, as it is described as reaching towards the sky and greeting the sun, suggesting a divine or spiritual connection.
The act of burying treasures at Maggie's feet shows a deliberate effort to honor and preserve the relationship, with the speaker being careful not to harm the tree.
The tree's gift of a white blossom is interpreted as a gesture of love and reciprocity, indicating that the relationship is perceived as mutually beneficial and emotionally significant.
The poem suggests that nature, represented by Maggie, possesses wisdom and bears silent witness to human lives, offering solace and understanding.

Free Verse poem

Today I whispered my fears to you — Wrapped my arms around your hard body Scales tickling the underside of my arms

You’ve been keeping my secrets Since I was ten — You were barely as big as I And now a behemoth You can almost touch the sky Reach right up and greet the sun for me

I bury treasures at your feet Dig down deep into the earth Careful not to tap a single root — You’ve been the protector of my bounty For your entire life What knowledge you bear, all for a little girl In gratitude, as proof of Your love You present to me One perfect white blossom

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Lori Carlson writes poetry, fiction, personal essays, creative non-fiction, and articles. She focuses on Spirituality, Life Lessons, Self-Awareness, Relationships, Mental Health, and LGBTQ+. She is the Owner/Editor of Promptly Written and Not For Bedtime Stories. You can find her older stories on her creative writing blog, Ravyne’s Nest and random ramblings on her personal blog, A Delicious Torment.

POETRY

Ode To Maggie

Free Verse poem