avatarJulie Ranson

Summary

Three children in a church service find humor in the titles of hymns, suggesting risqué interpretations, until their laughter is halted by a parent.

Abstract

The narrative captures a moment of youthful mischief during a church service where three kids, seated in the second to last pew, amuse themselves by finding double entendres in the titles of hymns. They snicker at "How Great Thou Art" and "Blessed Assurance," twisting their meanings into playful innuendos. Their private joke is brought to an end when one of their mothers intervenes, signaling the end of their fun. This microfiction piece is part of the Thrifty Words Challenge, specifically under the theme of "Service."

Opinions

  • The children's interpretation of the hymn titles as suggestive or risqué indicates a common childhood behavior of finding humor in the unintended meanings of words.
  • The author likely intends to evoke a sense of nostalgia or amusement from the readers, recalling similar moments of innocence or the discovery of adult concepts through childlike eyes.
  • The intervention by the mother suggests a contrast between the innocence of the children and the adult expectation of solemnity during a religious service.
  • The inclusion of the children's game within the context of a church service adds a layer of irony, juxtaposing the sacred with the profane in a lighthearted manner.
  • The story may also reflect on the theme of "Service" by highlighting the unintended disruption to the solemnity of the church service, while also serving as a humorous anecdote within the broader context of the Thrifty Words Challenge.

50 Word Microfiction

Naughty Giggles

Thrifty Words Challenge #6: Service

Photo by Kyler Nixon on Unsplash

Three kids sat in the second to last pew and ignored the happenings in the service.

They quietly giggled over song titles in the hymnal because this was funny, “How Great Thou Art” -between the sheets. And, “Blessed Assurance” -under the covers.

A momma taps a shoulder to end it.

Microfiction
Giggling
Church
Bad Behavior
Thrifty Words Challenge
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