avatarZachary Seda

Summary

A person flees through a forest, narrowly escaping ravenous pursuers, and finds refuge in a building, saved by an unknown individual's timely distraction.

Abstract

The narrative follows an individual who is being chased by unseen, yet terrifyingly persistent, entities through a dense forest. The protagonist, driven by fear and the primal instinct to survive, runs blindly, creating distance from the relentless pursuers whose hunger is insatiable. The chase culminates at a clearing where the protagonist seeks sanctuary in a dilapidated building. Hidden within a closet, they narrowly escape detection as the pursuers investigate the area. An unexpected scream from elsewhere draws the pursuers away, allowing the protagonist to escape. The story concludes with the protagonist expressing gratitude towards the unknown individual whose scream provided a diversion and became their last hope for survival.

Opinions

  • The protagonist's fear is palpable, indicating the dire situation and the high stakes of being caught.
  • The pursuers are depicted as almost supernatural in their relentless energy and drive, contrasting with the protagonist's human limitations.
  • The story suggests a theme of survival against overwhelming odds, highlighting the protagonist's resourcefulness and resilience.
  • The use of sensory details, such as the sounds, smells, and visual cues, effectively creates an atmosphere of suspense and horror.
  • The narrative implies a connection between the protagonist and the unknown individual, hinting at a larger, unseen community or shared human experience in the face of danger.
  • The author's invitation to engage with them on social media and explore more of their work suggests a desire for feedback and community interaction, valuing the reader's experience and potential collaboration.

My Last Hope

A Flash Fiction

Photo by Marc-Olivier Jodoin on Unsplash

Dirt compressed underneath my feet, leaving a footprint in its wake. Sticks snapped, agitating what shouldn’t be alerted to my existence. I bolted through the army of trees, unsure of orientation.

Not that it mattered, so long as distance remained greater than zero. The adrenaline was all I had left, but even that depleted quickly. Soon I’d be out of breath, and out of options.

Their bone-chilling shrieks let me know just how close they really were. But I couldn’t look back to confirm it, not that I desired to from the fear of what I might see. One false step would be my death.

They didn’t run out of energy. Not like me. I ran on fear. They ran on hunger, a hunger that could never be satisfied.

My solace came when I arrived at the clearing. One lone beaten down building. My last hope.

With the unexpended energy left, I dashed to the building, battering the back door open with startling ease. I didn’t have time to examine my surroundings, opting for the nearest closet.

Footsteps rumbled up to the building. Rapid breathing multiplied, growing louder. Shadows danced around the room from the sunset penetrating the windows. The stench repulsive, that of death. Moans groaned on, with the occasional shriek that nearly had me reciprocate the noise.

I held my breath as footsteps stomped closer, a wheezing more pronounced. Clasping my hands over my mouth, I shut my eyes, praying the door remained shut. Edging back slightly into the coat rack, I kept still, trying my best to blend in with the clothing inside.

The door swung open with one flying off its hinges as it crashed back on the floor. Light flooded in at an angle, barely illuminating me. The rotting smell permeated the area, and I struggled to hold back gagging.

It stepped a foot in, sniffing around, and I restrained from screaming. An outcry from elsewhere echoed around. Frozen still, I observed my pursuers become hypnotized by the sound. They shrieked in near perfect unison, sprinting off to follow the scream.

Breath gradually left my mouth, careful to not make it too audible. My chance to flee arrived, and I took it. I don’t know who that person was that called attention to themselves, but I thank them for being my last hope.

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