
My 100 Comments On 100 Stories By 100 Writers. Part 1–1 To 10
What I said about what everyone wrote (often while being the wrong side of a gallon of Belgian lager). Including links to all the stories.
#1 - Malky McEwan. You Know You Are With The Wrong Person If…
“I am deffo the Hanibal Lecter type. My nostrils tell me you would very much like to make money from this article. Am I right?”
#2 - Bicho (a bit hacked). Dear Reader, All I Want is to Be With You
“OK you can have the claps for good behaviour. No smoking after lights out.”
#3 - Reuben Salsa. Jennifer Lawrence and 100 Things You Can’t Fuck With
“This list is a fuck up and I am going to fuck with it. This was too good an idea to miss. You should have been the 100th writer on this publication and the list should have every contributor in 1 to 99 order, leaving you, Reuben, number 100. I can’t fuck with missed opportunities!”
#4 - JF Danskin. Successful Writing Sprints
“Phew! That sounds like really hard work. Good tips, I guess but I’m really glad I don’t write for a living. That doesn’t sound like much fun.”
#5 - FJCMontenegro. You Can’t Get No Satisfaction
“My takeaway from this is that, because, along the way we rejected the Rolling Stones, in favour of, say, Radiohead, because it’s in our DNA. I get it. Is that why Americans doggedly cling on to dinosaurs like Bruce Springsteen, because they are lower on the evolutionary ladder? Or something?”
#6 - Bradan Writes Stories. One for the History Books
“In the wrong hands, history books are deadly weapons.”
#7 - Sam W. Artistry and Elemental Magic
“The spirit of human endeavour, fallen on the triple-edged sword of technology, politicking and unabashed capitalist greed.
“What is it that we really value?”
Our values have been eroded, distilled down to wanton consumerism, cheap holidays in other people’s misery and the need for instant gratification. Time (life) is too short and too lucrative a commodity, priced to sell. All beauty lost with it.”
#8 - Jillian Spiridon. The Influencer
He made her kill someone because she had no soul to sell. Nice take on a well-trodden path.
“You shouldn’t follow strangers”.
Perhaps Amelia was a demon all along. Perhaps all influencers are demons in waiting. Lots of potential subtexts in there. Nicely written Jillian.”
#9 - Grimsby Hackney. Nemesis
Mike Knittel responded: “Brilliant Stuff”
“Thanks Mike. I hope you’re putting a contribution to this 100 stories malarkey.”
#10 - Rachel A Fefer. He Followed Me Home, But You Can Have Him…

My 100 Comments On 100 Stories By 100 Writers. Part 2 -11 To 20 Coming Soon.