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Summary

A young woman, overwhelmed by financial and social pressures, murders her mother and attempts to kill her brother before fleeing with her boyfriend, only to commit suicide when confronted by the police.

Abstract

The story recounts the tragic tale of a young woman burdened by debt and the shame it brings to her family. In a desperate attempt to escape her troubles, she resorts to violence, killing her mother and wounding her brother. She then flees to a beach destination with her boyfriend, unaware that he is also a fugitive from the law. The story culminates in her suicide when the police catch up to her, fulfilling her desire to end her life and problems in one final, drastic act.

Opinions

  • The author suggests that the protagonist's actions are a result of extreme stress and despair due to her financial situation and the societal pressure to maintain a certain lifestyle.
  • The story implies a critique of the social expectations placed on individuals to appear successful and the lengths to which people might go to meet these expectations.
  • The protagonist's relationship with her boyfriend is portrayed as a complicating factor in her life, as he is not only complicit in her escape but also has his own criminal history.
  • The narrative hints at the protagonist's mental instability, as she believes that ending her life is the only solution to her problems, indicating a lack of support systems or mental health resources.
  • The story raises questions about the nature of love and responsibility, as the protagonist's actions towards her family are justified in her mind by a distorted sense of love and necessity.

SHORT STORY

Murder Most Bizarre

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The girl was young. She had dreams.

She wanted to have a boyfriend. She found herself one. They were so like-minded.

She wanted to wear designer clothes. She bought them.

She wanted to wear fancy shoes. She bought a pair a week.

She wanted to travel. She made plans with her boyfriend.

She couldn’t earn money at the rate that she wanted to spend. She borrowed.

She couldn’t earn money at the rate at which she had to return the borrowed money. So the money lenders turned up at her door. And threatened her. They threatened her mother. They stalked her.

Her mom lamented about how the family’s respect was compromised. Her brother muttered about how he could not walk on the street with his head held high because neighbors were laughing at their state of affairs.

The money lenders threatened to barge into her workplace and shatter the remains of her respectability.

She got tired of it all.

She hatched a plan.

She decided to eliminate all of her problems. Including herself.

On the planned night, she made sure her mom was asleep in her own room, and the brother in his room.

She quietly carried two important things to her room. A huge rock and a sharp knife.

At the stroke of midnight, she crept up to her mom’s room. Her mom was fast asleep.

She aimed carefully at her mom’s head, and in one clean strike, the rock did its job. It was messy, of course. But less fussy and there was no sound.

She loved her mom. She did this out of love. No one will understand.

She spent the next hour talking softly to her mom.

Time was running out. She had many other things to do.

She crept up to her brother’s room. She tested the knife. It was sharp.

She went for the jugular. She had read a lot about the right body parts and angles required for the task.

The knife found its mark. Her brother screamed a little and collapsed in a pool of blood.

She had nothing to say to him. She did not love him. She just did not want to leave the job half done. Hence he was marked too.

She sat in a daze on the sofa. She had a few more things to do.

She went through her mental checklist of things to achieve. Travel. Not done yet.

She dialed her boyfriend’s number. Good boyfriend. Arrived immediately.

They drove to the airport. She had already booked tickets to the beach destination on her list.

She spent the next day having the holiday of her life with her good boyfriend.

The brother lost a lot of blood. But he didn’t die. He called the neighbors, who called the cops.

The mom was very dead. But the brother lived. And told the tale.

The cops launched a hunt. They tracked her down.

They took her in. The good boyfriend too.

The boyfriend denied any knowledge of the events.

She tried to protect him. She insisted he knew nothing. She loved him.

The cops found that hard to believe. He had recently mowed down 2 people in cold blood on the streets and driven away. The cops were hunting for him since then.

She was done. All her dreams were fulfilled. She grabbed a cop’s gun and put a hole in her head.

Inspired by a recent news article about similar events.

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