A MYRIAD OF FORM(S)
More Syllabic Poetry
Monthly Prompt №5.1:August — introducing the dodoitsu
Background
Dodoitsu (都々逸) is a form of Japanese poetry developed towards the end of the Edo period, which came to an end in 1868. Often concerning love or work, and usually comical, Dodoitsu poems consist of four lines with the moraic structure 7–7–7–5 and no rhyme for a total of 26 morae, making it one of the longer Japanese forms. The form, tone and structure of Dodoitsu derive from Japanese folk song traditions. Dodoitsu poetry is referenced in the manga and anime series Shōwa Genroku Rakugo Shinjū in reference to its historical recitation by dancers in Japanese red-light districts.
Below is the link to an example written by myself and originally posted in the Sky Collection.
In this poem, each stanza is in the form of a dodoitsu, syllabically (but not thematically).
The Prompt
As the first choice for the August forms prompt, write a single poem (or a group of as many verses as you’d like) using the Dodoitsu form. Please submit your drafts to The Bazaar of the Bizarre, link this post to your submission and also tag me! Please make sure to use “Forms Prompt” as your main tag, along with any other tags you may want to use. All I can say is bend the rules if necessary (like I did), but have fun with it…and Right On! Rite On!! Write On!!!
Tagging some writers, though all are welcome to participate :)
Harley King Denise Baxter Yoder J.D. Harms Christina M. Ward Dennett Imad Franco Amati Samantha Lazar Frederick Andrew Naomi Leilani Acosta John Levin A.j Thomas Joanna Vang Daniel A. Teo Deepak Jayal Aaron Quist Gaston King Chloe Ann Marie Steele Amanda Dalmas Terry Barr Ivette Cruz Viraji Ogodapola Dr. Fatima Imam Joseph Lieungh Filza Chaudhry Andrea Juillerat-Olvera Jesse M. Gonzalez Barry Dawson IV Daniel Barry William J Spirdione Iva Hotko Lennie Varvarides Justin Haag Alina Sileanu Georgia Lewitt Warren Brown ScienceDuuude Roberto C. Salvador Marcus Enne Baker Mimi Bordeaux Vic Spandrio Somsubhra Banerjee Vixen Lea Lisa Bolin Marie A Bailey Sean F Corbin Brittany Alicia Carter Roxana Ștefan Rachel Ramkaran (she/her) Tracy Busby Anthony O'Dugan Elizabeth Barnesco Haikuster Chris Mooney-Singh TC Hails Stephanie Blossoms Pol Neiman Francis David Kelli Sheckler-Amsden Rosa Diaz Paula Light Carolyn Riker rowen maeve G.R. MELVIN Kat Halligan A.M. Radulescu Caroline Mellor Melissa Coffey Katrina Bos Mike Scarpiello Steve B Howard Tim Sussmann Arem Daich Claire Kelly Alex Godley Bhavyakirti Renee Podunovich Shahzad Baloch Matt Gleason Henery X Ossal Nelson Saurabh Dana Sanford Gianfranco Vigneri Isac Valdez Bahora Saitova Mimi Toya
2021 MDSHall is a poet and a creative, who is the creator and curator of The Bazaar of the Bizarre and a submissions editor for The POM, living in Illinois, also writing in association with the Writes of Passage, “forged on the wordwrights’ anvil,” and the Muse Echo Collective, Purveyors of the Poet Tree of Discoursing Drums beating by any dreams necessary.





