avatarLiam Ireland

Summary

"The Rose In The Broken Jar" is a poignant poem reflecting on the aftermath of a love that has ended, with a glimmer of hope for future love.

Abstract

The poem "The Rose In The Broken Jar" paints a vivid picture of a love that has withered away, leaving behind a scene of desolation and heartache. It speaks of unopened letters, absent keys, and the stark realization that love has departed. The narrative unfolds through the debris of a once vibrant relationship, marred by broken promises, dreams, and lies. Despite the pain, the poem suggests that love may return, as symbolized by a beautiful rose in a broken jar, which thrives amidst the tears and offers a promise of healing and the rekindling of love.

Opinions

  • The author conveys a deep sense of loss and sorrow over the end of a relationship, emphasizing the emotional void left behind.
  • There is a palpable frustration with the deception and disillusionment that accompanied the relationship's demise.
  • The poem reflects on the possibility that the relationship's longevity and routine may have contributed to its downfall.
  • The author suggests that forgetting the "words and music" of love can lead to its ruin.
  • Despite the heartache, there is an underlying optimism that love, represented by the rose, can resurface and flourish even in the midst of pain and brokenness.
  • The poem implies that love's absence is a shared experience, as indicated by the list of names at the end, perhaps signifying a community of individuals who have also navigated the complexities of love and loss.

The Rose In The Broken Jar

A poem about the end of love

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The door is ajar, the curtains are drawn, the letterbox flaps in the breeze. The floor is strewn with letters unopened there’s no sign of a kiss nor keys.

In the debris of my life all tattered and scattered, tearfully torn on the floor. Tired and worn, faded forlorn, call it what you will, I don’t care. Love doesn’t live here any more.

All I can say at the end of the day is there’s nothing left that I can say. Whatever it was that got in the way, love doesn’t live here any more.

Love just got up and walked right on out, in a flood of tears, and a scream and a shout with a promise to leave me for dead.

Too many broken promises, too many broken dreams, too many lies I believed in, true love just ain’t what it seems. Love doesn't live here any more.

Whatever happened to the love we once had, lying in each others arms, our hearts were fed. Where did it all go wrong? Maybe we loved a little too long and got bored singing the same old song.

Maybe it's just that we forgot the words and music to our favourite tune and that is what led to the rack and the ruin. And now I sing a mournful song, the end is here, I could be right, I could be wrong. For now I am singing out loud, " Love doesn't live here any more......"

But the rose in the broken jar by the door looks beautiful in the tearful rain.

And I am sure love will come to live here, to help to ease the pain.

And love will live here for ever, ever, evermore, again.

Geetika Sethi Thewriteyard Henery X (long) Tony Young, Jr. Denise Larkin Terry Mansfield Rebecca Stevens A. 🦋 Adiba Abid Concierge Jo-Anna~ Communications Connector Dr John Rose Dr Michael Heng Joe Luca

Poetry
Poem Of Love
Illumination
The End Of Love
Breaking Up
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