avatarChristopher Grant

Summary

The text reflects on the narrator's experiences with a woman whose inconsistent behavior and changing appearance leave him in a state of uncertainty and self-doubt, ultimately realizing the relentless nature of love.

Abstract

The narrative delves into the complexities of love and attraction through the eyes of the speaker, who encounters a woman with a mercurial nature. She changes her hair color and possibly her name, which adds to the speaker's confusion and inability to make a lasting impression. The speaker's anxiety and desperation to win her over are palpable, as he tries to entertain her with stories, hoping to mask any previous missteps. The woman's unpredictability and the speaker's internal struggle with indecision ultimately lead to his retreat, with the false hope of a 'next time' offering little consolation. The story culminates in a moment of clarity when he hears her laugh from afar, acknowledging that love is unforgiving.

Opinions

  • The author suggests that love can be an overwhelming force that disregards personal boundaries or efforts to control it.
  • The speaker's fixation on the woman's changing appearance indicates a struggle with identity and the ability to connect on a deeper level.
  • Inner turmoil and self-doubt are portrayed as significant barriers to forming meaningful relationships.
  • The use of humor and storytelling as a coping mechanism in social interactions is highlighted, though it may not always be effective.
  • The narrative implies that the pursuit of love often involves repeated attempts and the acceptance of vulnerability.

Love?

For her, as usual.

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Love? I met her Once, or maybe more. Was hard to tell, She never used The same name twice, Though it might have Been me, focussed On this or that, Or caught out by The crowd, anxious, Shy, maybe stoned. Desperate, me, To convince her, Show my fun side, Open myself up In case my first Impression left Crumbs on the chair. Did she notice? I’d ignore them, Summon a tale, Hope to distract And never bore.

Inconsistent Best described her, Brunette this week And blond the next, Haunting me with Familiar fears, My inner voices Contradicting The rest about How to proceed. Indecision Won in the end (As usual) And once again I’d slink away. ‘Next time,’ I’d say To cheer myself, Knowing it a lie, Then one night from Across the room I heard her laugh And learned that love Knows no mercy.

Like yours truly, Emily Gibson thinks rhyme is over-rated.

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