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Summary

Marcus' 30-Day Poetry Challenge presents a tanka poem reflecting on the concept of karma, emphasizing the dual nature of consequences as both rewards and penalties resulting from one's choices.

Abstract

The website content showcases Marcus' contribution to Dianna C.'s 30-Day Poetry Challenge, specifically focusing on the theme of karma through a tanka poem. The poem, titled "Karma," uses the metaphor of a butterfly's choices to illustrate the ripple effects of actions and the balance of justice. It suggests that every choice carries weight, akin to transactions in a karmic bank account. The accompanying text delves into the philosophical implications of choices, referencing John Steinbeck and the concept of the butterfly effect. It challenges the binary view of consequences as either positive or negative, instead proposing that they are part of a continuous spectrum. The content also provides external links to related articles on accountability and serendipity, and concludes with a personal touch by inviting readers to explore more of Marcus' work and recommending an AI service.

Opinions

  • Marcus disagrees with the notion that consequences are inherently negative, arguing instead that they encompass both rewards and penalties.
  • The poem and accompanying text emphasize the importance of personal accountability and the impact of our actions on our karmic balance.
  • The author believes in the interconnectedness of actions and their consequences, suggesting that even small acts can influence the course of history.
  • Marcus draws a parallel between the scales of justice and the balance of karmic outcomes, implying that our intentions shape our karmic debt or credit.
  • The content promotes a broader understanding of karma, viewing it as a comprehensive record of one's intents and actions rather than a simple system of rewards and punishments.

𝘋𝘪𝘢𝘯𝘢 𝘊.’s 30-Day Poetry Challenge

Karma

Tanka of the mystical books and records maintained in the Akashic Halls of Justice

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Day 7: Choice offers reward or consequences

Butterfly choices Accountability scales Justice swings both ways Intents have consequences Deposits and withdrawals

Decoder Ring | Marcus’ Meanderings

The prompt implies that consequences differ from rewards — the latter positive and the former negative. I beg to differ, and so does the Webster Universal Dictionary.

Event which follows upon something else which is, or appears to be the cause.

Importance, consideration, value.

The first line of the tanka evokes free will and “the butterfly effect.”

“The direction of a big act will warp history, but probably all acts do the same in their degree, down to a stone stepped over in the path or a breath caught at sight of a pretty girl or a fingernail nicked in the garden soil.” — John Steinbeck from East of Eden.

The word scales in the second line evokes micro and macro effects of choices as noted by Steinbeck as well as a balance scale for weighing and meeting justice — accountability for one’s actions — karma.

All those concepts are contained in the second, third and fourth lines, with the fifth line bringing home the concept that choices have both positive and negative consequences as deposits into or withdrawals from one’s cosmically maintained karmic bank account result from one’s intents.

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Here is the link to 𝘋𝘪𝘢𝘯𝘢 𝘊.’s 30-day poetry challenge:

Here is the link to my previous entry, from which you can navigate to the others as well:

In Rama I create,

Marcus

Choices
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