avatarM.C. Commander

Summary

The text describes a hot day where the narrator finds solace in a cup of coffee while observing the world outside.

Abstract

On a sweltering day, the narrator enjoys a cup of black coffee adorned with a pattern of red and blue hydrangeas, which seems to offer a sweet distraction from the bitterness of the outside world. The scene is vivid with life: a dog barking at shadows, moths attracted to lights, and men moving through the landscape like lizards, searching for the essence of summer. The men are likened to the process of coffee brewing, shedding layers under the intense Florida sun until only the essence remains, much like the concentration of coffee as water evaporates.

Opinions

  • The narrator appreciates the simple pleasure of coffee as a respite from the heat.
  • The outside world is perceived as bitter and harsh, contrasting with the comforting floral design on the coffee cup.
  • The observer draws a parallel between the men adapting to the heat and the transformation of coffee during brewing, suggesting a poetic reflection on human resilience and the enduring nature of life under challenging conditions.

it’s hot outside but i’m chilling

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sometimes a piercing cup of black coffee is delivered in ceramics patterned with red and blue hydrangeas, colors mulling about the mind, flowers on the cup are sweet enough to protect against the bitterness outside the window,

a dog barks at shadows, moths crowd the lights,

and all along the lot

men waft through the grass like lizards in tonged breath — sliding between cars and alleys licking about for the source of Summer’s bones

the men shift away the top layer like the film fastened above a coffee cup, water bakes away leaving only the fat until it burns too,

under the Floridian

sun.

Poetry
Noir
Short
Florida
Micropoetry
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