Is There More Than One Way to Begin an Article?

Match the introduction with the audience and purpose

There are numerous way to being writing. In fact, I encourage writers try writing three different leads. Explore the possibilities by experimenting with various types of lead. Be sure to consider the audience and the purpose of the article because that will influence your decision as to which introduction to use.

Question

Begin with questions that will be explored throughout the remainder of the writing. The more intriguing the question, the stronger the impact will be on the reader. This will tease the reader into reading more to discover answers.

Example

When you think of people with heroic qualities, whose face do you see? Is it a kind face, someone with an intelligent mind or a formidable body with the strength to take action? Do you call them a hero because of one event or a lifetime of behaviors?

Setting

Begin with a description of the setting that reflects the events. At the conclusion of a championship basketball game, the description might focus on the confetti, excited fans in the bleachers, music blaring, and lights flashing the score.

If the same story were being told from the opposing team’s point of view, the setting description would be much different. Then the focus would be on the trash littering the floor, the emptying of the bleachers, the deafening music that carries too much bass, and the burnt-out light on the scoreboard.

Example

She silently walked into the barren room surrounded by white walls, sensing the presence of fear and grief. Around her existed the contrast of loud commotions mixed with the silence of the unknown. The way she handled the situation demonstrated her compassion for humanity as she briefly provided encouragement. Her strength to move from one patient while remaining calm and composed demonstrated her ability to put her knowledge into action. However, this situation was not unlike many others that surrounded this silent hero.

Startling Statement

This may be one sentence that shocks the reader and then a paragraph that develops the statement with reasons and details or a series of shocking comments. The audience should be considered because what would shock one reader may be commonplace for another.

Example

Heroes no longer exist, or at least I didn’t think so. Their absence has caused a great abyss within the minutes that tick away in our daily lives. More devastating is the void of heroic qualities needed for society to continue. So, when someone does come along with qualities of a hero, it is noticed. Compassionate, strong, and intelligent, Cindy Gallagher is one who is noticed. She changed my mind and showed me how a true hero responds in crises.

Story Starter

When a brief anecdote begins the writing, it leads the reader into the remainder of the piece. Often this sets the mood and prepares the audience for what follows.

Example

During an emergency room visit to St. Alphonsus Hospital on a late night in June, I observed a hero take charge in a seemingly hopeless situation. There had been an accident on the interstate involving numerous vehicles and causing multiple injuries as well as casualties. The crowded hallways held patients disoriented and afraid surrounded by staff who triaged with competence.

It seemed like each person functioned independent of the other. The confusion hampered communication and systematic processes became lost in the stress of the moment. However, when Cindy Gallagher walked down the hall, the environment changed.

Quote

Quote an authority on the topic. This adds power to the writing when it is supported or introduced by someone the reader is familiar.

Example

Merriam Webster’s Dictionary defines a hero as “a person admired for achievements and noble qualities . . . one who shows great courage.” By applying these standards I support the nomination for this years Hero in Health award. The person who deserves this honor is admired for all who know her, revered for her outstanding qualities, and respected for her dedication and willingness to but others’ needs before her own interests.

Maya Angelou said, “I think a hero is any person really intent on making this a better place for all people.” I couldn’t say it any clearer. It is a pleasure to introduce the hero of the night, Cindy Gallagher.

This article provides examples of different possible leads in fiction.

Activity

Even if you already have an introduction for a work in process, take a moment to write three new leads using the examples above. Sometimes exploration creates new possibilities.

Prior to beginning your next story, write three leads. It is astonishing how the lead changes the direction and voice of the entire text.