Iridescence: A Free Verse Poem Demonstrating Metaphor
Let the reader decide interpretation of “Iridescence”

Iridescence
The iridescence of raindrops, wildly colorful in oil-slicked patterns on the pavement.
Reflections of my face, twisting into spiraled nonsense, one ear slides into blue.
An eye morphs into yellowed blur.
I try to see closely the parts of me where they should be,
but the mirror of rain and oil is a lying lens, a syncopated juncture of earth and man and sky.
The spill of sin smears me into something I am not meant to be.
I am afraid to smile.
I do not want to see the dreadful color that would be.
Metaphor: a thing regarded as representative or symbolic of something else, especially something abstract. — Google Dictionary
Poetry often uses metaphor. Metaphor gives us imagery and story but what we are experiencing is only the surface level of the writing. Consider the oil slick in this poem. The author is seeing self in the reflection of this oil slick on the pavement — what does this do? How does this change things? What does this image mean? The reader is invited to determine for themselves what this image means or represents other than the actual meaning of the words.
I’d love to hear your interpretation of this poem as an example of metaphor.
Another metaphorical poem I have written is The Poet Cleaning which uses the cleaning of a fish as a metaphor for the writing process a poet goes through to create poems.
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