avatarJames G Brennan

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James G. Brennan shares a personal reflection on love and paradise inspired by a Nancy Sinatra song, accompanied by his own photography and a YouTube video, in response to a poetry prompt by Melanie J. and Lucy Dan 蛋小姐.

Abstract

The web content presents a creative piece titled "In Love with Paradise" by James G. Brennan, which is a response to a poetry prompt about love songs. Brennan expresses his affection for paradise through a tanka poem that references Nancy Sinatra's "You Only Live Twice," a theme from a James Bond movie. He provides a visual context with his own photographs, including one of "our place," and embeds a YouTube video that captures the essence of his experience. The piece pays homage to Melanie J.'s romantic haiku and acknowledges Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 for providing a platform for his words. Brennan also thanks other contributors and readers for their engagement, expressing gratitude for the community's support.

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  • Brennan admits that his tanka is as romantic as he gets in poetry, implying a preference for subtlety over overt expressions of love.
  • He reveals a personal connection to the song "You Only Live Twice," as it resonates with him while in the crystal clear water looking back at the beach.
  • Brennan's inclusion of a YouTube video suggests that the song and the visuals together encapsulate his feelings about paradise.
  • He expresses appreciation for the prompt by Melanie J., which encouraged him to articulate his romantic sentiments in a poetic form.
  • The mention of "Titans" and the acknowledgment of specific individuals indicate a sense of community and mutual respect among writers and contributors.
  • Brennan humorously apologizes for any repetition in names, highlighting the frustration with technical difficulties and his commitment to giving credit where it's due.
  • He expresses sincere gratitude to Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 for her continuous support and to all readers for their time and attention.

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In Love with Paradise

What’s your love song prompt response

Photo: James G. Brennan.

You only live twice I’m in love with paradise Nancy Sinatra sings James Bond movie theme tune while viewing crystal clear sea.

James G Brennan 2021

This piece is in response to Melanie J. At last! This is about as lovey-dovey romantic as I like to get in the world of poetry, well, at least it’s not a punk song! This often plays in me head while in the crystal clear water looking back at the beach, looming coconut trees just beyond our place. See below.

Our place. Photo: James G. Brennan.

Read Melanie’s Romantic melody Haiku here.

All prompted by Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她) “What’s your love song” prompt here.

Come and have a go if you think you're soft enough! Titans: Amy Pierovich, Ed.D. Kasun Ranasinghe Amy Knight Ramblings Anon David Rudder Do excuse any repeat prescriptions. I promise you, it’s extremely painful adding names with a shite clapped out computer, takes for bleedin’ ever.

Thank you as always, Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她) for giving my words a platform. 🙏✨ Thank you all for reading and your precious time. Always. J. 🙏✨

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Prompt Response
Love Songs
Paradise
James G Brennan
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