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Summary

The poem "If sleep was a person" personifies sleep as a gentle, intuitive woman who brings comfort and peace, and whose absence leaves the speaker feeling lifeless.

Abstract

In the poem "If sleep was a person," the author imagines sleep as a female figure with closed eyes, lost in dreams and longing. This personification of sleep is depicted as someone who hums with the images in her mind, a dreamer with messy hair from tossing in bed, and who carries the fresh scent of lavender. Her name is envisioned as something calming and prayer-like, her voice so soothing that one would want to curl up in her arms. The poem reflects on the intimate relationship between sleep and the speaker, who misses the comforting touch of sleep on their face and the stories she told of past and future. Sleep is portrayed as an intuitive and silent observer who understood the speaker's feelings deeply. The poem concludes with a sense of loss and emptiness now that sleep has left, suggesting that the speaker's life feels devoid of vitality in her absence.

Opinions

  • Sleep is portrayed as a comforting and nurturing presence, akin to a caring companion.
  • The speaker has a deep emotional connection with the concept of sleep, missing her presence and the solace she provided.
  • The poem conveys a sense of nostalgia and longing for the restorative and intuitive qualities that sleep embodies.
  • The absence of sleep is likened to a loss of life's vibrancy, indicating its fundamental importance to the speaker's well-being.
  • The author uses sensory imagery, such as the scent of lavender and the softness of sheets, to evoke the tranquility associated with sleep.

If sleep was a person

A poem

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if sleep was a person she would have her eyes closed dreaming from a different place giving in to her longings

the images in her mind would make her hum for she is a dreamer with messy hair from the turns she took in her bed

she still smells like her sheets fresh with a tint of lavender

her name would be something that rolls off the tongue something that calms the mind

touched gently her name would feel like a prayer her own voice would be so soft that I want to curl up in her arms whenever I hear it

it’s been some time since I’ve done that allowed her to trace her fingers over my face

she used to tell me stories about the past and sometimes the future she was very intuitive more than anything she was a silent observer knowing exactly how I was feeling

it‘s a shame I‘ve never noticed her in a group of people because now that she‘s gone I feel like the life has been sucked out of me.

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Sleep
Insomnia
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