I Challenged the ChatGPT Bot to a Sonnet-Writing Contest
I wanted to know if AI had the soul of a poet. What happened next left me speechless…

Everyone has gone a bit ChatGPT bonkers at the moment. Talk is that this brilliant bot can produce blogs, articles, exam essays and editorials so well-written that they are impossible to differentiate from a human-produced text.
Writers and academics are predicting people will never need to write a real word again or do any research. It is also dizzyingly speedy in its responses. Little wonder scribes and sages are shaking in their shoes.
On behalf of poets everywhere, I decided to put this to the test. I had planned to write about the sonnet form as the next one in my series of articles on classic rhyme schemes. Why not see if ChatGPT could produce a sonnet? In fact, why not compare our research too?
Some Sexy Sonnet Facts
Well, maybe not that sexy, but I had to get your attention and we do need a baseline for our research. I did this the old fashioned way, using books and the Internet. (Ha!)
- Sources disagree on the origin of the word sonnet: some say it comes from the ancient Occitane word sonet, meaning little song, others that it is from sonetto, which means “little sound” in Italian.
- Despite claims that the sonnet’s inventor was 14th century Tuscan poet Petrarch, it appears that we should instead thank Giacomo di Lentino (c.1188–1240), an Italian notary who worked for the court of Frederick II in Palermo, Sicily. His inspiration was a Sicilian peasant song known as the strambotto, although other academics claim that its origins are from classical Arabic literature. (Oppenheimer, P. (1982). The Origin of the Sonnet. Comparative Literature, 34(4), 289–304.)
- Sonnets typically follow a 14-line lyrical form with a set rhyming scheme. In English, the lines are in iambic pentameter — 10 unstressed and stressed syllables forming five metric feet. ( Shakespeare's Sonnet 18 might help: “Shall I comPARE thee To a SUMmer’s DAY” — “da DA da DA da DA da DA da DA” )
- The Shakespearean sonnet is in fact the most well-known format and has the pattern abab cdcd efef gg.
Let’s test the bot!
I wanted to know how the bot’s knowledge matched up with my painstaking research from a number of sources. Here’s how the chat went:
F: What is the origin of the sonnet?
Bot: The form of the sonnet originated in the work of Italian poets like Dante Alighieri and Francesco Petrarch, and was later popularized in England by poets like William Shakespeare and Edmund Spenser.
F: What about Giacomo di Lentini?
Bot: Giacomo di Lentini was an Italian poet who is credited with the invention of the sonnet form.
F: So it wasn’t Dante and Petrarch who originated it then?
Bot: While Dante Alighieri and Francesco Petrarch are often credited with popularizing the sonnet form, it is generally accepted that the sonnet was invented by Giacomo di Lentini.
OK, so this is interesting. I corrected the Chatbot and it then came back with my own info presented as if it had known it all along. That’s a bit sneaky.
Write Me a Sonnet, O Bot Bard
Now to the main event. I wanted to challenge the robot to a sonnet-writing contest. I already had a brief ready, and here it is:
F: I challenge you to write a sonnet from a man in the past who is using AI to write to a woman reincarnated in the present.
Nice, don’t you think? Such highly appropriate subject matter.
The real reason I chose this was that I had already written a Shakespearean-style sonnet on the theme several years ago. Yes, my sonnet was already written, but I hope you will forgive me for that.
Fiona’s Sonnet
The lines I write to you my one true love, Appear upon this page in future time, I look into my mind and seem to move, Into another place with every rhyme. And when you read these words of mine one day In your new life, remember me and how I tried my very best to make you stay. And all you wanted — do you have it now? Does your new world bring happiness or pain? Have you forgotten me, and what we had? And if we had the chance to meet again Would that make you smile or make you sad? Love never dies, you know that this is true. And I am here in this room, now, with you.’
I have to confess to a touch of hubris here. I am rather pleased with this sonnet. As well as following the rhyme scheme (abab cdcd efef gg) and using iambic pentameter (da DA da DA da DA da DA da DA) I feel it conveys well a rather mysterious and intriguing concept — the ghost in the machine, the computer having consciousness — you get the idea.
Whatever, I am confident that ChatGPT will a) fail to understand the brief and/or b) produce something that adheres to the rhyming scheme but lacks the soul of a poet.
I press the button to enter my challenge into our chat.
In the blink of an eye the words appear and the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. It has a touch of cliché and the iambic pentameter is questionable at times, but does it have soul?
You be the judge.
The ChatGPT Sonnet
My love, you were once a beauty fair In days of old, when knights were bold Your face was like a rose, beyond compare Your lips, a sweet and gentle fold But time, that thief, has stolen your fair form And left you here, in this modern day Your face, once known to every knight and lord Is now a mystery, hidden from view But I, with my AI-assisted pen Can still write words that reach across the span Of centuries, to find you once again My love, you are my inspiration I’ll write of our old love, and its sweet flame And hope that, through these lines, you’ll know my name.
Well, which do you prefer? Does the ChatGPT truly have a poet’s soul?
