avatarAlexis Zarco

Summary

The webpage contains a poem titled "How to swim" that explores the theme of unrequited emotional support in a metaphorical seascape, alongside three other poems linked at the end.

Abstract

The central piece of the webpage is a poem called "How to swim," which uses the metaphor of the sea and swimming to convey the struggle of attempting to support someone who is metaphorically drowning in their own emotions. The speaker describes pouring out their heart in "wordy waterfalls," yet their efforts are met with indifference, causing their words to sink without buoying the recipient's spirits. Despite the speaker's attempts to provide a lifeline through their words, the other person remains unresponsive, leaving the speaker to question the effectiveness of their support. The webpage also includes links to three additional poems, each with its own theme and title: "grandmother’s chair," "someplace else," and "Erasure."

Opinions

  • The poet feels their emotional support and words of encouragement are not being acknowledged or utilized by the person they are trying to help.
  • There is a sense of frustration and helplessness in the speaker's inability to rescue the other person from their emotional turmoil.
  • The poem suggests that despite the speaker's best efforts to communicate and provide comfort, the impact of their words is ultimately beyond their control.

Poetry

How to swim

A poem.

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i spilled out my heart to you in wordy waterfalls & you just let it all crash against the rocks. i expected you to let the waves of sentences & paragraphs lighten the anchor pulling you deeper into the ocean’s waters. i wanted to let my words create a world where you could stay afloat on your own, but you just let them sink. what more can i do for you when all my utterances come like the tide? what more can i do for you when my words become driftwood that washes up on the shore, unnoticed by you? you’re drowning, but you won’t let me teach you how to swim.

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