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Summary

This webpage features a free verse poem titled "Gently Treading" by Lori Carlson, which reflects on the experience of self-silencing to maintain peace.

Abstract

The webpage presents a poignant free verse poem "Gently Treading" by Lori Carlson, which delves into the theme of suppressing one's own voice in order to navigate relationships without causing upset, a habit learned in childhood. Despite a vow to not live in such a way, the narrator acknowledges the recurrence of this pattern. The poem is accompanied by a photograph of a lone figure in a thoughtful pose, credited to Houcine Ncib. Readers are invited to explore more of Carlson's poetry through a provided link. The page also encourages visitors to become Medium members, highlighting that part of the membership fee supports the author if they sign up via her referral link. Additionally, the page outlines Lori Carlson's writing portfolio, noting her diverse range of topics including Spirituality, Life Lessons, Self-Awareness, Relationships, Mental Health, and LGBTQ+ issues, and mentions her roles as Owner/Editor of two Medium publications.

Opinions

  • The author, Lori Carlson, conveys a personal struggle with self-expression, suggesting a tension between maintaining peace and authentic self-expression.
  • The poem reflects a nostalgic and introspective tone, with the author acknowledging the persistence of childhood behaviors into adulthood.
  • The author's body of work indicates a commitment to exploring deep, personal themes and a dedication to supporting the LGBTQ+ community and discussing mental health openly.
  • By inviting readers to become Medium members through her referral link, Carlson implies a belief in the value of her work and the platform's content, worthy of reader support.

POETRY | FLINT AND STEEL

Gently Treading

Free Verse poem

Photo by Houcine Ncib on Unsplash

I pretend play — watch my words, sugar-coat them make them easier to swallow or say nothing at all

I learned this game as a child — to be small, so very small to be quiet yes Momma, no Momma try not to upset Momma

I swore I’d never live that way again but here I am — small and quiet gently treading around you

©2022 Lori Carlson. All rights reserved.

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Lori Carlson writes poetry, fiction, personal essays, creative non-fiction, and articles. She focuses on Spirituality, Life Lessons, Self-Awareness, Relationships, Mental Health, and LGBTQ+. She is the Owner/Editor of Promptly Written and Not For Bedtime Stories. You can find her older stories on her creative writing blog, Ravyne’s Nest and random ramblings on her personal blog, A Delicious Torment.

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