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Summary

The text is a reflective piece expressing a deep desire for personal freedom from various constraints and fears.

Abstract

The author of the web content, under the poetry prompt "Freedom," shares a personal yearning to live without restrictions, like a free bird. They aspire to create a space where they can establish their own rules and be the ruler of their own kingdom. The desire for freedom encompasses liberation from pain, toxic relationships, hidden secrets, self-deception, financial worries, self-limiting beliefs, the judgments of others, self-comparison, overthinking, and anxiety. The author acknowledges the remaining challenges in the pursuit of freedom and invites others to contemplate and articulate what they seek freedom from, emphasizing the importance of self-awareness and personal growth.

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  • The author values autonomy and self-determination, wishing to live by self-created rules.
  • There is a recognition of the importance of resilience, facing pain with a smile and an attitude of defiance.
  • Emotional freedom is sought from relationships that do not serve the author's well-being.
  • The author seeks to release themselves from the burden of hidden secrets and self-inflicted lies.
  • Financial security is identified as a significant aspect of personal freedom.
  • The text reflects a desire to overcome self-imposed limitations and societal expectations.
  • The author wishes to be free from the opinions of others, indicating a pursuit of authenticity.
  • There is an acknowledgment of the need to break free from the cycle of comparison and self-doubt.
  • The author expresses a wish to conquer overthinking and anxiety, which are seen as obstacles to true freedom.
  • The invitation to other writers suggests a communal aspect to the pursuit of freedom, with the author appreciating the support and engagement of their peers.

Freedom

Poetry prompt day:-17

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I want to be a free bird,

Flying in my own space without,

Getting into any kind of race.

I want to create my own space,

Where rules are created by me, for me.

I want to be a ruler of my kingdom,

And want to embrace the freedom.

I want to make myself free from pain,

It’s not mean that I don’t want to handle pain,

It’s just that when next time something bad will happen to me,

I will smile and say bring it on and be free.

I want to be free from the people who don’t deserve me.

I want to be free from the secrets which I hide in my heart.

I want to be free from the lies that I told to myself.

I want to be free from the fear of having no money.

I want to be free from all the self-limiting beliefs.

I want to be free from others opinions on me.

I want to be free from comparing myself.

I want to be free from over thinking and anxiety.

At last, I want to be free from all those thoughts,

Which try to make me week.

I don’t want to be a greater or a looser,

I just want to be me.

There are only four prompt left for this challenge. So, why not to write about freedom. We all are want to make ourselves free from many things. We want to be free from fears, Self-doubts and so many other things in our lives.

Today take some time off and think about what are things that you want to be free from and pen down your thoughts.

I would love to invite Dr. Preeti Singh Bhavna Narula Dr. Fatima Imam Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她) A Rustic Mind (Manali Desai) Ntathu Allen Josh Balerite Acol

Thank you all of you for reading and writing amazing every day.

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