avatarMarie A. Rebelle

Summary

A seasoned writer shares five essential writing tips with a young aspiring author.

Abstract

The article discusses a mentorship moment where a veteran writer imparts wisdom to a young writer at a local establishment where they both frequent. The seasoned writer, Marie, offers practical advice to help the young lady refine her craft, focusing on concise storytelling, perspective, writing routines, and community feedback. The tips include writing a complete story in exactly 100 words to learn brevity, writing from the perspective of an inanimate object to enhance descriptive abilities, separating the writing and editing processes to maintain momentum, writing daily to build discipline, and joining a writing group for constructive feedback and growth.

Opinions

  • The author believes in the importance of precise storytelling, emphasizing the value of editing to distill a narrative to its essence.
  • Writing from the viewpoint of an inanimate object is suggested as a creative exercise to develop a writer's ability to engage the senses and explore new perspectives.
  • The author advises against editing while writing, as it can disrupt the creative flow and potentially derail the writing process.
  • Daily writing is advocated as a non-negotiable habit for anyone serious about becoming a writer, suggesting that consistency trumps lengthy, sporadic writing sessions.
  • Joining a writing group is highly recommended for the benefits of community support, thematic challenges, and the opportunity to receive and give constructive criticism.
  • The author reflects on personal growth from participating in a writing group, indicating that continuous learning is a key component of a writer's journey.
  • The author does not consider themselves an expert but acknowledges having enough experience to offer guidance to others.
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ABOUT WRITING

Five Tips I Gave A Young Writer

I love sharing the knowledge I‘ve gained through years of writing

We frequently go to the same establishment and have more or less become part of the furniture, so to speak. Some of the staff, I now see as friends, and I love taking my tablet with me and sit there writing, with the buzz of other people and the surrounding music.

We also see young people working there for a couple of months, then moving on, either due to school engagements or because they found another job.

Currently, there’s a young lady working there, and one day I learned she’s into writing when we asked her what she does outside of her work. I told her I write too, and ever since, whenever she sees us, she has a standard question: how’s the writing going?

And she asks me for advice.

She’s a starting writer and is working on a book. It’s an ambitious project, but she frequently runs into problems, and then she has a million questions for me.

One of our evenings there, I gave her the following advice:

1. Exactly 100 words

Write a complete story in exactly 100 words. You can also make it exactly 200 or 250, but no more. Also, it shouldn’t be between 200 and 250, but exactly the number you decide on.

When you write your story, it will always be more than the number of words you have decided on. The object of this exercise is to learn you how to write to the point. By editing your story down to the desired number of words, you learn to leave only those words in your story that really add to it. During the editing process, you will delete all unnecessary words, leaving only those that really tell the story.

2. An inanimate object

Write from the point of view of an inanimate object, such as a chair, a glass, a tree, or any object you see around you.

The object can only observe, not take part in the story. This forces you to use some senses. The object can hear and see, and it has feelings about what they observe. Writing from the perspective of an inanimate object forces you to see the world from a different angle.

3. First write, then edit

One thing this young writer does is to read what she has written the previous time, and then edit it before she continues writing. I told her to first write, and forget about editing. Editing is something you do when you have finished your story, and not while you are still writing it.

A pitfall of editing while you write is constantly changing what you have already written. That way you never get on with your story, and lose your momentum, which can also cause you to stop writing altogether.

4. Write every day

If you want to be a writer, write every day. You don’t have to sit down and write for hours. No, just make sure you carve out a block of time from your day to write. Fifteen minutes before you go to bed. An hour in the morning before you go to school or work. Half an hour before you prepare dinner. Grab a cup of coffee at your favorite coffee shop on your way home, take out your tablet or laptop, and write.

Just make sure you write every day.

5. A writing group

I advised the young writer to search for and join a writing group. A place where you have to follow a theme, have a maximum number of words for your story, and where you know you will get feedback from other writers.

I ran a Dutch writing group from December 2012 until December 2017, and we assembled every two months, writing to a theme, and giving each other feedback. During those five years, even though barely ever writing in Dutch, I learned a lot about writing.

My writing.

This was all because of the feedback I prepared for all submitted stories, and listening to the feedback of others. Much of it I could apply — and still do — to what and how I write.

I definitely don’t see myself as an expert on writing, but over the years, I have learned enough to at least give others a bit of advice!

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