avatarJillian Spiridon

Summary

An elderly craftsman and his client negotiate the sale and capabilities of a highly sophisticated artificial woman named Eve, who is designed to captivate men, including world leaders.

Abstract

The narrative revolves around a conversation between an artisan, who creates lifelike artificial beings, and a client interested in purchasing one of his creations, Eve. The craftsman emphasizes Eve's mesmerizing eyes and the profound impact they have on men, suggesting they could incite wars. The client, while skeptical, agrees to purchase Eve with the condition that she can sing, a feature not originally specified. The craftsman agrees to make the necessary adjustments for an additional fee, confident that Eve will enchant the president and become his next wife. The client warns of the consequences should Eve malfunction like the previous model, hinting at a history of such incidents. Despite the tension, the craftsman remains attached to his creations, referring to them as his children, and expresses hope for Eve's success in her intended role.

Opinions

  • The craftsman takes immense pride in his work, considering his creations to be more than mere dolls or toys, but rather as children he sends off with affection and hope.
  • The client is results-oriented, expressing concern over past malfunctions and emphasizing the importance of Eve's performance in her intended role.
  • There is a mutual understanding that Eve's success could have significant implications, potentially influencing a world leader and altering geopolitical dynamics.
  • The craftsman is open to modifying Eve's abilities to meet the client's needs, indicating a willingness to adapt his creations for the right price.
  • The client is cautious about overpaying for the craftsman's work, particularly given the unreliability of past purchases, and is prepared to withhold payment if Eve does not perform as expected.
  • Despite the commercial nature of their relationship, the craftsman displays a deep emotional connection to his creations, which contrasts with the client's more pragmatic view.

Eyes

Men will go to war for her…

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“Isn’t she perfect?”

“You marvel too much at your handiwork, old man.”

“But don’t you think there’s something about the way her gaze stares into you? Those eyes — men would have destroyed cities in past centuries for her, I’m sure of it!”

“I fail to see how she’s unlike any other doll you’ve created.”

“Don’t call them dolls! Imbecile! They are not children’s toys! Each one is lovingly crafted down to the minute detail — ”

“All right, all right, enough with your spiel. How much is she?”

“For you, a bargain.”

“I can’t do six figures again. The last one broke down halfway through the mission.”

“I think that was a matter of circumstance — ”

“I’ll pay half now and half after. That’s the best I can do.”

“The craftsmanship alone — ”

“If she can sing, I’ll give you double.”

“Sing? That wasn’t in the specifications you gave.”

“If she can’t sing, there’s no point. He has a type.”

“I can make a few adjustments — for a fee.”

“How much longer then?”

“Give me a week, and she’ll be able to sing with the greats.”

“That sounds promising. But understand: if she malfunctions like the last one, you’re not getting the second half of the money. We had to pretend the last one had a little accident.”

“Was that — ? No, don’t tell me. I’m better off not knowing.”

“A fair choice. Things got pretty messy.”

“You always treat my children so harshly.”

“It might be best if you leave this basement once in a while. You’re starting to treat them like real people.”

“They are real — to me. I send them off each time with the affection and hope of a father.”

“Please spare me. Just make sure this one works. I’d hate to have to sever our long-time partnership, old man.”

“I told you this one will be able to get men to go to war for her. She’s perfect as the president’s next wife.”

“Let’s hope her eyes work that magic you promised. He’s still hung up on the last one, so we’re gambling here.”

“If anyone can make a world leader trip over himself, it’s my Eve.”

“You already named her?”

“I name all my children.”

“Very well. I expect to see results.”

“And I expect you not to put my child in harm’s way.”

“I’ll see what I can do.”

“That’s all I ask.”

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