Eye Rests: Slow Down The Scroll
Write with eye rests to slow the reader skimming
There's a parallel path I want you to see—a similarity between driving on a freeway and how your articles get read.
When taking a long road trip on a highway, I like a road with plenty of rest stops or places to pull off for various reasons.
Many of these exits will have a place to grab a bite, gas up the car, or even nap. A rest stop helps us in a variety of ways:
- take a break to stretch our legs,
- slow things down a bit to pace ourselves, and
- get back on the road refocused.
When reading a four-to-eleven-minute article, I like a piece that has plenty of "eye rests" for my eyes to catch a break in various ways:
- have things change up to stretch my eyes,
- slow down my scrolling a bit so I can understand what I'm reading, and
- get back to the article refocused.
Maybe you're asking what an "eye rest" is and if you can get a coffee and a doughnut, right? Let me give a few examples of eye rests.
What's an Eye Rest?
- Photo(s) — Photos are great for breaking up a story and retaining a reader's interest. The USA Today was great at this when newspapers were a thing.
- Bullet Points or Numbered Lists— These can be a numbered list like we saw above or just bullet points like this list.
- Bold text — When you want to make a strong point or even something you think might get highlighted. The hope here is to slow the reader down just a bit.
- Quotes — A quote with a larger text and indented can be like a photo, but it's brain candy rather than eye candy. (See quote below)
- Short Paragraph — I've seen some seven or eight-line paragraphs. It might have got you an A+ in school, but readers these days will turn to the next article.
- A Stand-Alone question — These are one—line paragraphs asking your reader a question. Perhaps a point-to-ponder.
- A Section Break or Subheading — A subtle eye rest, but helpful.
- A Relative Link Out— Some publishers don't allow this, but as a reader, I like it when the author links back to relevant articles or even to someone else's work on Medium.
“A quote can be like a photo, but it’s brain candy rather than eye candy.” — Mike Sansone
All of the above will slow down a scroll, give the reader a chance for their eyes to catch up to their brain, or vice-versa, and make your work easier to digest.
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