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Summary

The poem "Expectant" by Josh Lonsdale reflects on the struggle and hope of young expectant mothers against the backdrop of oppression and exploitation by those in power.

Abstract

"Expectant" is a poignant poem that contrasts the resilient spirit of young mothers with the bleak reality imposed by authoritarian figures. The poem depicts a world where the youthful hope of expectant mothers is juxtaposed against the despair of a society that has been stripped of its voice and autonomy. The mothers-to-be hold onto hope and resistance, determined to be heard and acknowledged, despite the oppressive forces that seek to silence them. The poem also alludes to a broader societal critique where the powerful are depicted as thieves, blind to the spirit and exploiting others for their own gain, ignorant of the impending doom they bring upon the planet. The poem ends with a grim reflection on the exploitation of life itself, suggesting that the oppressors view other beings merely as resources to be used and forgotten.

Opinions

  • The young mothers are portrayed as symbols of resistance and hope, refusing to succumb to the oppressive forces that dominate their society.
  • The poem suggests that the powerful have lost their moral compass, prioritizing their own comfort and gains over the well-being of others, including their own progeny.
  • There is a sense of generational disconnect, with the old being resigned to their fate while the young are cursed with hope and the will to fight against the injustices they face.
  • The poem conveys a strong criticism of those in power, characterizing them as spiritually blind thieves who have sacrificed their own humanity in their relentless pursuit of domination and consumption.
  • The author implies that the societal structure is akin to a factory-line to Hell, where individuals are reduced to mere products, devoid of individuality and agency.
  • The powerful are depicted as being incapable of hearing the planet's distress, focusing only on their own insatiable needs and desires.
  • The poem reflects on the exploitation of life, suggesting that the oppressors' actions will ultimately lead to the erasure of memory and existence, reducing all to nothingness.

Expectant

The gossip of the young expectant often filled up the dark, Those old and dumb bygone veterans had long since lost their bark; the voices they’d never owned were taken with their bite, they bowed their heads to bondage; forsook the will to fight.

Still, those first-time mothers soon to be would wail and persist, ‘As long as we’ve got legs, should we not rail and resist? The blood of our split and spilt sisters left behind a mist that never truly faded; concrete proof we do exist. Perhaps if we scream loud enough our voices will not be missed, They too will stain these walls, and not be so easily dismissed.’

(The young were cursed with hope, you see Yet in days to come that too would be pulled, squeezed and wrung free by balled-up fists of primate thieves with endless pockets and the need to feed and please and feed and ease their moaning bottomless bellies.)

And, as all revolts true ever ignite in the absence of light, the young chalked dreamt-up names against the black of night, like the stars they too would fade, but first they would burn bright and haunt those thieves with ghosts glowing a sick milk-white.

Alas, the young did not know that the thieves were blind to spirit, for they’d burglarised their own the day they’d learnt to fear it, and of their bodies left, they’d cover them out of shame but strip everything else for taking was their game.

That’s why they steal our children’s milk to feed their shrieking babes they’ll pinch and loot whatever they can to shut up all their pains, their agony is so loud they do not hear this planet’s knell!’ These the mothers old barely held heart left to tell, ‘That we are simply products in a factory-line to Hell.’

‘The primates have created so many other dimensions; Hell just happens to be one of their oldest inventions. They do much more than eat with those gnashing teeth, They’ve made up entire stories to turn us into beef; they say it’s natural law to make slaves of other species, and we were never more than ingredients to recipes. Our lives are a wicked process from solid to liquid to gas, and there will be no trace of who we were no memory, nor ash.’

© Josh Lonsdale, 2020

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