avatarLucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她)

Summary

The website content discusses a humorous and reflective poem about an eternally flushing toilet, which prompts thoughts on the concept of eternity, and invites participation in a poetry challenge.

Abstract

The "eternal toilet" poem humorously reflects on the modern convenience of flushing toilets, suggesting a parallel between the endless flushing and the concept of eternity. The author, Lucy Dan 蛋小姐, muses about the privilege of disposing of waste effortlessly, only to find her toilet flushing continuously, as if serving an invisible "ghost army." This quirky situation serves as a poetry prompt for others to explore the theme of 'eternity' in their writing. The article also provides instructions on how to join the poetry challenge, encouraging tagging of other interested individuals without a specified deadline. Additionally, the content includes links to other works by the author and related articles on Medium.

Opinions

  • The author views the act of flushing a toilet as a symbol of privilege, highlighting the ease with which modern society can dispose of waste.
  • The continuously flushing toilet is personified, humorously depicted as if it has a life of its own, serving the needs of a "ghost army."
  • There is an underlying environmental concern about the waste of water from the unnecessary flushing, though it is presented lightheartedly.
  • The author expresses a desire to resolve the toilet issue promptly, indicating a sense of urgency or discomfort with the current malfunction.
  • The poem and subsequent invitation to participate in the 'eternity' prompt reflect an open and inclusive approach to creative writing and community engagement.
  • The author seems to enjoy wordplay and using everyday situations as springboards for deeper philosophical exploration.

eternal toilet

poetry prompt: eternity

Photo by Marc Schaefer on Unsplash

flush with a button how privileged this is that my poo swirls its way into the oblivion

out of sight out of mind

but my toilet has more to say it flushes and it flushes and it flushes and yet flushes more

as if some ghost army is using my toilet and flushing away the invisible ghost poo but using my very real water to do so.

Tagging Toya Qualls-Barnette | Aimée Gramblin | Angela Farley | Neha Sandhir S | Ruchi Thalwal | Lopes Charmingman | K.S. | Hope Coalesce if you’re up to it and anyone else interested in today’s prompt: eternity.

How to join: include the original post of the person who tagged you for reference and tag 5–10 other people (or simply ‘tag all’) who might be interested in this prompt! (Ps, there’s no deadline!)

Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她) has no idea why her toilet is flushing for eternity and hope she fixes it quite soon :(

🐰🕳 Hop down the rabbit hole!

✍👀 Read this piece from 𝘋𝘪𝘢𝘯𝘢 𝘊.

Poetry
Poetry Prompt
Eternity
Toilet
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