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Summary

Mireya, yearning for sunlight after days of rain, finds gratitude and appreciation for the sun's life-giving and uplifting presence, despite its temporary absence.

Abstract

In the narrative "Elements Of Gratitude: The Sun," Mireya wakes up with anticipation for the sun's appearance after days of rain. Her excitement is akin to a child's on Christmas morning as she eagerly parts her curtains, hoping to feel the sun's rejuvenating energy. Although the sun doesn't shine brightly on this day, Mireya reflects on her deep connection with its warmth and light. She acknowledges the sun's power to invigorate her spirit, teach valuable lessons, and bring peace to her life. Despite the sun's absence, she expresses patience and gratitude, recognizing that her appreciation for it has grown due to its temporary disappearance. Mireya cherishes the present moment, understanding that life's blessings are found in the opportunity to experience and appreciate the world around her.

Opinions

  • Mireya has a profound appreciation for the sun, viewing it as a source of happiness and energy that charges her both physically and emotionally.
  • The sun is personified as a dear friend whose presence is deeply missed and whose return is eagerly awaited.
  • Mireya believes that the sun's influence extends beyond the tangible, affecting her mood and well-being.
  • She feels a sense of humility and awe for the sun's role in the universe and its impact on all life.
  • Mireya's gratitude for the sun is rooted in its absence, suggesting that scarcity can intensify appreciation.
  • The narrative conveys a sense of hope and patience, as Mireya is confident in the sun's eventual return.
  • The author, Melissa Bee, uses the story to express a broader message about gratitude and the importance of cherishing the present moment.
  • The sun's absence allows Mireya to reflect on its significance and the lessons it imparts, emphasizing the value of unseen or intangible influences in life.

Elements Of Gratitude: The Sun

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Mireya awoke with the shadows of darkness filling her room. Her arms stretched above her head reaching for the day’s start. It had been raining for four days and excitement came with the possibility of sun break.

Within the heights of cabin fever, Mireya tossed the covers off like a child on Christmas morning and planted her feet into the plush carpet. She proceeded down the familiar path to the window that was calling her attention.

Mireya separated the curtains in anticipation of the sun’s long-awaited arrival. She inhaled slowly to fill her lungs and launch an intimate moment.

This was the moment.

As the blinds crept up, her reflection in the windowpane was clear and the landscape revealed the missing sun’s glow. Despite her longing, The Sun would not sharply greet her on this particular day.

She needed The Sun to recharge the depletion of the preceding gloomy days. Its most powerful energy not felt but could effortlessly ease an inside existence. She craved the zeal of good spirits which only came with The Sun’s presence. She sighed with acceptance but deep down wished she could cast the clouds away.

Without a glare in her eyes, the reflection was vivid…

She peered at the dark eyes intently looking back.

With a tilt of her head, her teeth began to unveil its marvelous white gleam and her cheeks hoisted proud.

“When you return, every hour will be worth it. Happiness lies in the minutes I can feel your warmth upon my cold yearning skin. Your heat is the force that ignites my heart.

The mind lays still in the moments I can absorb your old soul- the oldest lessons you quietly teach. Your peace will release my thoughts and free my burdens. You shine- no matter the rain.

All life revolves around your short rise and long fall. Position in the universe, my dear Sun, is never a condition. I am humbled by every second of sweet serenade, sung by the birds in your honor.

How did I get so lucky?

My love for you remains patient, for I know you will return. I am engulfed with comfort because reliance on you has never harnessed doubt.

Sun, you are my fiery rock for the rest of days. Thank you for always giving your light unconditionally.

For even when I am gone, you will be here.”

Today Mireya was lightyears from gone. Today, she was here to live another day. She celebrated in the now, for the day she’d be reunited with The Sun.

She would live now, for this day- was a blessing all of its own.

With every superseding breath, life grew in importance, in which she had the opportunity to be appreciative of so much more.

She walked away from the window but was sure to take with her its aura of gratitude. She guarded it with the utmost protection.

She left with the golden eyes that allowed her to see all its grace…

She gave immeasurable thanks that they were open and they were hers.

For she may have not seen The Sun, but understood that her appreciation for it, had only come from its absence.

There was one more thing she couldn’t leave behind…

The smile could not be abandoned as it held The Suns depth so bright-

Today, she would smile…

“For even when you are gone, I will be here.”

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