avatarLucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她)

Summary

Lucy Dan's poem reflects on the unexpected joy of experiencing a brief moment of cold weather, juxtaposed with the discomfort of prolonged exposure, and invites writers to share their unique weather experiences.

Abstract

The web content presents a personal reflection by Lucy Dan through a poem titled "Eighteen Seconds of Negative Fifteen Degrees Celsius (Five Degrees Fahrenheit)." The poem humorously captures the author's surprise at enjoying the crispness of cold air while taking out the trash, despite an initial preference for warmth. This moment of appreciation is short-lived, as the harsh reality of the extreme cold sets in, prompting questions about the choice to live in such a climate. The piece transitions into a writing prompt, encouraging others to explore and write about the peculiarities of their local weather, whether it be quirky, annoying, or unique. The content also includes a call to action for writers to contribute to the publication "The Brain is a Noodle" and mentions Lucy Dan's recently published book of tiny poems.

Opinions

  • The author initially believes happiness is derived from warmth, particularly the comfort of home.
  • There is a revelation that cold weather can be invigorating, albeit for a very limited duration.
  • The author expresses humorous exaggeration about the discomforts of living in a place with extremely cold winters, including the possibility of getting icicles in the nostrils.
  • The experience of the cold is likened to a necessary novelty that stimulates the mind, suggesting a broader appreciation for varied experiences.
  • The writing prompt indicates an open and inclusive view of writing, inviting writers of all levels to share their perspectives on weather-related experiences.
  • Lucy Dan's dedication of the poem to Nada and the mention of her book suggest a personal connection with her audience and a passion for sharing her work.

Eighteen Seconds of Negative Fifteen Degrees Celsius (Five Degrees Fahrenheit)

a poem and a writing prompt!

Picture Description: Icicles and snow on a field and trees // Photo by Yura Khomitskyi on Unsplash

Cozy within my home, I thought, my only happiness came from warmth.

Yet, fueled by the need to get rid of this trash on trash day, I finally stepped out into the frigid air and found that I, too, love the refreshing feeling of -15C on my face.

Granted, there is a huge caveat: I love it for the exact period of time it takes to take out the trash.

Any more, and I begin to wonder: Why do I live and love a place that is SO COLD in the winter that it hurts my face? Will I ever feel my fingers again? Are those ICICLES in my NOSTRILS???!?!?!?!?!?!?!!

It reminds me that while I may love the warmth that cozy fuzzy socks may give me, sometimes switching it up gives my brain noodle the novelty it needs.

#WritingPrompt: Write about a quirky / annoying / unique bit about the weather for where you live.

Inviting Sam Branstner| Raffaella Ferretti | Pierre Trudel| Colm Clark | Ashlea Morgan | Troy B. Jordan | Jennifer Leth | Ali | Sahil Patel| O.M. Fernandes | if you’re up to it and anyone else interested to smash that writer’s block, join in on this tiny challenge and write a response, wherever it takes you! It can be a tiny poem, a shortform piece or an essay — whatever comes into that brain noodle!

Hi I’m Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她) and I want to dedicate this poem to Nada, who absolutely loved the way that I called nostril icicles “nostrilcicles” in a previous poem. 📚📚 PS, I published a book of tiny poems!

^ by Jennifer McDougall!

Poetry
Poetry Prompt
Cold
Winter
Recommended from ReadMedium