avatarLisa Bolin

Summary

The website content is a reflective and evocative poem titled "Don’t Be Casual With Your Life" by Lisa, which encourages readers to value their lives deeply and not take it for granted, interwoven with a challenge to use specific words in a poem.

Abstract

The poem "Don’t Be Casual With Your Life" by Lisa is a profound piece that delves into the complexities of life, urging readers to appreciate the sanctity of their existence. It touches on the mundane aspects of daily interactions, the power of ideas, and the inevitability of life's challenges. The author emphasizes the importance of not being indifferent to one's life, suggesting that it should be treated as sacred and not lived in conflict. The poem also subtly questions the existence of a higher power, leaning towards logic and human resilience. The content includes a creative exercise, "Poetry Salvage EXTREME," inviting readers to craft their own poetry using a list of evocative words provided. The article concludes with a personal note of gratitude to Xavier Van Holde for his inspirational contributions and an invitation for readers to subscribe to Lisa's newsletter, "Nordic Notes," for more of her poetic works.

Opinions

  • The author believes that life should be cherished and not treated casually, suggesting it is something sacred.
  • There is a sentiment that the concept of God may be outdated, with the author placing more value on logic and human understanding.
  • The poem conveys a sense of frustration with trivialities and a call to embrace deeper, more meaningful aspects of life.
  • The challenge "Poetry Salvage EXTREME" reflects the author's belief in the power of words and creativity as tools for personal expression and growth.
  • The author expresses a sense of community and mutual support among creatives, particularly acknowledging the inspiration provided by Xavier Van Holde.
  • Lisa's writing style is described as salty-sea poetry, indicating a raw and natural approach to her craft, which resonates with the theme of valuing life and creativity.

Don’t Be Casual With Your Life

A Poetry Salvage Extreme

Photo by Engin Akyurt from Pexels

Their walks, their talks, That shit grows on stalks. They sprout trivial, mundane, Keeping shit on the brain, Not subtle, more like a hammer, Well, what do you expect, damn her! The clues she ensues ain’t nothin’ but the blues But you keep the beat, Keep it level on the street While ideas, like waves of tears Come crashing around your ears, As lightning, blitzes, flashing, Major brainwaves, neurons bashing Against the threat disaster poses, Right in front of all their noses.

There’s no God.

Because the concept is outdated, Seeing miracles, overrated. It is logic, formed in code, Someone’s hit the motherlode! Pissed and angry people rally, Seething, raging, takin’ a tally, Taking stock, seeing fury. Is it murder? You the jury? Don’t be casual with your life, It should be sacred, not in strife. We’re not broken, just if flux, Not disposed, we give two fucks, Or maybe five, or even ten, We’re not going through this again! This is our bread and butter, No more heartache, no one to suffer. We got this. We can do it. Hot shoe shuffle, tools to screw it, To the sticking place, our courage, Let it go, the decades-long worries. We’ve learnt to crawl, then walk then run, Now it’s time we had some fun.

Like a wave, words flow over me. I drink them in, splutter a little, and out they come again. Stanzas, with PS words floating like little corks on the surface. Do I have a sinker? An anchor? Will that keep me from drifting? Or will I float, flotsam, jetsam, on the boiling ocean waves? Perhaps I will crawl to land. Coughing, spitting, salty sea words on my tongue. Hard grains of sand, embedded in my knees. No soft landing. Grazed skin burns from salty sea-caresses. The rough and tumble of creating.

~thanks for reading~

Poetry Salvage EXTREME!

Challenge: Use as many of these words as you can in a poem.

trivial/talks/crawl/walks/lightning/flashing/ideas/ crashing/ subtle/ clues/ major/disaster/ threat/ poses/ God/ seeing /logic / pissed / people / seething/ murder /casual /life / sacred /broken /bread /disposed.

Thanks, once again, to the wonderfully creative Xavier Van Holde who keeps providing creative inspiration to this (sometimes) very tired poet. I cannot tell you how many times in the past few weeks the Poetry Salvage has dragged me out of myself to create ❤

Lisa creates salty-sea poetry, languid lyrics, nurturing, natural, nuanced poems, and a whole lot of nourishing nibbles in her home in Finland. If you’d like to keep in touch, she writes Nordic Notes. It’s infrequent but informative.

You might also like:

Idea Stream
Poetry
Life
Courage
The Bad Influence
Recommended from ReadMedium