Desire Strategies to Improve Your Writing? Part 3: Revision
Adding an umbrella to your wardrobe may make the day better
I love to be outside and appreciate whatever nature provides. Every day is a great day. However, I understand the value of staying dry when I splash in puddles and the importance of protecting my skin when it is hot. What I am trying to say is even great days can be better with modifications, adaptations, alterations — revision. Sometimes, a simple umbrella will save the day, while other times a canopy might be better.
Think of revision to your writing as the umbrella to your adventure. Without, what exists is good but with, the possibilities are endless and you have armed yourself with the ability to create the best possible outcome.
Revision occurs throughout the writing process. Each time my fingers hit the backspace and delete a sentence to rephrase for clarity, I revise. However, value comes from isolating and evaluating a draft and applying revision strategies, transforming the adequate to excellent.
Many writers merge revising and editing into one process. Separating them into two different steps provides a more focused approach. The article below explains the difference between the two and the benefits of each.
Where to start? How to begin? Often, writer’s block starts at the beginning when a writer faces a blank page. In an effort to get it just right to hook the reader’s interest, we sometimes find ourselves at a loss for words — at least, I do. There is value in writing several leads; thereby releasing the pressure to produce the perfect introduction. Try several strategies, then select the best or merge several together.
Though there are similarities between the next two articles, the first provides specific examples for a narrative that tells a story — fiction or non-fiction. The second focuses on expository writing.
Writing never comes to an end. It is a living piece of art that emerges over time, and if a writer returns to it at a later time, words morph and mature with simple pen movements. However, eventually, there is a deadline, the writer needs to make some money, or simply become bored with the topic. Until then, the possibilities for improvement are limitless.
Revisions are my favorite part of the process. They are my opportunities to play with the language. Like a child molds Play-doh into new forms, I manipulate words and phrases to produce rhythms, double meanings, emotions, and inspire thoughts. Three of my favorite revision strategies are discussed below.
If you try any of these strategies, I would love to know how they worked for you. I have experienced the positive results first hand and watched other writers grow in skills and excitement.
If you find value in what you read, my name is Brenda Mahler and more articles are available if you follow me on Medium. Enjoy!
