Decision

Summary

The text is a contemplative love poem expressing regret over a hasty action, a longing for the subject's laughter and company, and a hopeful yet desperate yearning for a better future together.

Abstract

In "Decision — Part 2," the author reflects on a recent blunder in expressing their feelings, which led to an undesired response. Despite the fear of rejection and the acknowledgment of personal faults, the speaker reveals a deep yearning for the subject's friendship and loyalty, emphasizing that they do not wish to break down the subject's defenses but rather to share in mutual companionship. The poem conveys a sense of vulnerability and the willingness to endure on one's knees, sustained by hope for brighter days with the presence of the beloved. The poem concludes with an announcement that there will be no continuation, inviting readers to explore other related works.

Opinions

The author feels foolish and regretful about their rushed decision to express feelings in a way that did not achieve the desired effect.
There is a sense of gratitude that despite the mistake, the subject did not completely shut them out.
The speaker is afraid of going beyond the boundaries of simple attraction and acknowledges their own brokenness.
The poem expresses a strong desire for the subject's company and a willingness to offer friendship and loyalty without trying to dismantle the subject's personal walls.
The speaker is patiently hopeful, even in the face of desperation, and is prepared to endure hardship for the chance of better days with the subject.
The poem indicates a finality with the statement that there will be no "Part 3," suggesting a closure or acceptance of the current situation.
Readers are directed to other works by the author, implying that the themes of love, regret, and hope are further explored in those pieces.

I hope — hope is not lost - A love poem

I am feeling like a fool inside. I am full of regret for the stupid method I used to show how I feel. I made a mistake with a rushed decision. A mere attempt to hear your adorable laugh, and I received the opposite of desired effect. Though, I am to thankful you did not close your door on me. I stumble over my tongue of lead. Restraining the facts. I am scared, and I have gone past the line of simple attraction.

I have no desire to dismantle your walls. As I am broken too. The pleasure of your company is all I yearn, and to offer you friendship and loyalty in return.

Now, waiting, hoping for hope to hold me up. As the patience brings me to my knees. I can live on my knees for the rest of my life. I can survive on the hope for better days to come. As through these desperate times, I only want you.

Alas, there will be no part 3

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