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Summary

The poem "Curly Girls" recounts a performance by two entertainers who lose themselves in the moment, forgetting the song they performed, yet remain hopeful about its success.

Abstract

"Curly Girls" is a reflective poem that captures the essence of a live performance by two spirited entertainers. The performers, caught up in the excitement of the stage, the music, and the ambiance, find themselves in a moment of oblivion, unable to recall the song they just sang. Despite this lapse, there is an air of optimism as one of the singers believes the forgotten song will soon be recognized as a winner. The poem is inspired by a real event from the author's past, who was part of the performance as a keys player and singer.

Opinions

  • The author conveys a sense of joy and immersion in the performance, highlighted by the phrase "so thrilled."
  • There is a touch of humor in the performers' reaction to being asked about the song they just performed, as they stand "vacant" and draw a blank.
  • The poem reflects a positive outlook on the imperfections of live performances, suggesting that even forgotten songs have the potential to become successful.
  • The author seems to cherish the memory of this event, as indicated by the note that the poem is based on a real experience from their past.
  • The use of the word "winner" implies a belief in the inherent value and potential recognition of their creative work, despite the momentary lapse in memory.

Curly Girls

A poem of two entertainers

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The curly girls shined on the stage in their own songs that slipped away.

They were so thrilled to play up high Big music, curtains, rainbow lights.

As the night rolled on More rush and thrill Their minds went blank so they stood still

And vacant when somebody said,

Please tell us that song you sang?

‘Well, I don’t know’ said the singer

‘but I’ve heard that soon it’ll be a winner.’

~

*Poem inspired by a real event many years ago — I was the keys player/singer.🐤

© America Zed. Other Poetry by America Zed.

Poetry
Excitement
Live Performance
Life
Musicians
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