Crafting ‘Transmutation’
Blackout Poetry, Poetry Sculpture & the Wisdom of Small Completions

Transmutation
Tell, me though What is it that you admire?
Without hesitation silence beauty in elegant reserve
It appeared as though He listened
transmutation.
She felt herself set loose she spilled forth ideas long locked away within her heart
A Poem found hidden on a page, in a book, found in a car park.
I found a book some time ago. A paperback, just lying on the ground, in a car park. I picked it up and wasn't able to find an owner, so I took it home, planning to donate it to charity. It sat instead, on a kitchen chair, for over a month.
Last week, I opened a page of the book at random and took a photo of it. I wanted to try blackout poetry, but couldn’t bring myself to tear up this new-ish looking novel. So I took a photo and used photoshop to ‘blackout’ the poem.
This is the result:

The Wisdom of Small Completions
Blackout poetry usually has elaborate or striking images drawn onto the page used. I wasn’t up to that this week. Instead, I scanned a *sketch (for a painting idea) that had been stuck on the fridge since last November and put it over the top. (The big red heart just was a last-minute choice to give the image some focus.)
It is thanks to the wisdom of Trisha Traughber, that I’m now starting to recognize and appreciate these ‘small completions’, which can be found in the messes of the ‘big ideas’ that get brainstormed, journaled, or sketched.
If I have any resolutions this (yes, it’s still ‘new’) year; it is this: To make some ‘small completion’ of any idea that I hold on to for too long — and close that energy drain.
*Note to Amy Marley: This is the ‘with falling petals’ sketch, I mentioned might be a painting one day — I wanted to show you this small completion instead: )
Not up to drawing right now, but it's in the cards
Ok, so I’m not drawing or painting, but we have been card-making round our way. I printed off a couple of copies of the (photographed) page and made the paper sculpture/ popout card that is in the image at the beginning of this article:

This paper sculpture poem/pop-out card experiment and the blackout poetry effort were inspired by Lisa Bolin, who made ‘poetry sculpture’ a thing:
In the previous photo, the curled and stuck together lines of the poem scattered about my card are my homage to Lisa.
The top right curl in the photo, (which reads ‘beauty in elegant reserve’) is a nod to Adelia Ritchie, PhD, who wrote an Haiku which actually had me making a ‘Mobius strip’:
The poem itself
‘Transmutation’ isn't a poem I normally would have written myself. When I first picked it out of the page, I wasn't sure if I liked it. But over the time of making things with it, reciting it while cutting it out, shaping it, pasting it, and generally absorbing it; I’ve come to love it.
It appeared as though He listened
transmutation.
I think what happened is that I ‘listened’. It was different to the ‘telling’ that’s usually going on with poetry making.
If there’s any single word I’d change it would be ‘admire’ to ‘desire’, which is how I recited it to myself.
Thank you, beautiful reader.
And if you’re moved to blackout or any poetry sculpture of your own devising, do let us know.






