avatarAmerica Zed⚡

Summary

The poem "Close My Eyes" explores the theme of misguided love and the narrator's realization of their own misunderstanding.

Abstract

The poem "Close My Eyes" is a reflection on a failed relationship, where the narrator initially believed they had a strong connection with the subject of their affection. However, they come to realize that their feelings were misplaced and that they should have been more cautious. The poem is divided into several stanzas, each beginning with the phrase "But I was wrong and you were right," emphasizing the narrator's regret and acceptance of their mistake. The poem ends with the narrator acknowledging that they should have learned to "close my eyes" to their own misguided feelings.

Opinions

  • The poem conveys a sense of regret and self-reflection.
  • The narrator acknowledges their own mistakes and takes responsibility for their misguided feelings.
  • The poem suggests that sometimes it is better to be cautious and not trust one's own feelings.
  • The poem uses repetition to emphasize the narrator's regret and acceptance of their mistake.
  • The poem implies that love can sometimes be misleading and lead to disappointment.

Close My Eyes

A poem of confusion

Photo by Hazzel Silva on Unsplash

I knew I liked you from the start I thought you liked the way I was

But I was wrong and you were right for every second for all of time I really shouldn’t trust my mind.

I thought you seemed a clever sort Our strange polarities made us laugh

But I was wrong and you were right for every second for all of time I should have learned to close my eyes.

You often seemed excited here with full attention words of cheer

But I was wrong and you were right for every second for all of time It’s best if I don’t use my mind.

Some place within you felt so deep and meaningful well just like me.

But I was wrong and you were right for every second for all of time I really should have said goodnight.

One day your face completely changed A heart transplant drove you away.

I touched reality You weren’t mine for not one second for all of time I really shouldn’t begin to cry.

I should have learned to close my eyes.

This love was all in vain.

© America Zed. Other Poetry by America Zed.

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