avatarTrisha Traughber

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The web content presents a free verse poem titled "Clay Draft Waits for Rain," which reflects on the theme of transformation and rebirth, inspired by the concept of Andoumboulou, a rough draft of a human being.

Abstract

The poem "Clay Draft Waits for Rain" is a piece of free verse poetry that uses vivid imagery of clay and storms to explore the idea of human beings as unfinished drafts awaiting transformation. The author, Trisha Traughber, was inspired by the Literary Impulse writing prompt involving the concepts of Andoumboulou (an African mythological term for a being that is a rough draft of a human) and Vorfreude (the joyful, intense anticipation that comes from imagining future happiness). The poem expresses a longing for the waters that will reshape and 'reborn' the clay figures, paralleling the human desire for growth and change. The article also acknowledges the contributions of Sylvia Wohlfarth and Priyanka Srivastava for their roles in the writing prompt and the compelling nature of the original suggestion.

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  • The author expresses a deep connection with the music of words, particularly those that convey the concepts of Andoumboulou and Vorfreude.
  • There is an appreciation for the beauty of the words Andoumboulou and Vorfreude, both in sound and meaning.
  • The poem suggests that the artist's first touch in shaping the clay is just the beginning, with the anticipation of rain symbolizing the potential for change and improvement.
  • The author conveys gratitude towards Sylvia Wohlfarth and Priyanka Srivastava for their inspirational roles in the creation of the poem.
  • The poem reflects a desire for a transformative experience that is both sobering and filled with joyful anticipation.

Clay Draft Waits for Rain

Free Verse Poetry

Photo by Possessed Photography on Unsplash

We are form baked in red clay not set in storm stone thirsting, singing to the waters that will undo this artist’s first caress in mud may we be reborn

This is a (belated) response to the Literary Impulse writing prompt, Andoumboulou and Vorfreude. These words, these sounds, and these concepts made me want to play with the music in the words forever, allowing no rough edges, no full stops, nothing final or finite.

Thank you Sylvia Wohlfarth for sending me this beautiful invitation to write about Andoumboulou, a word that sounds as beautiful as its meaning…a rough draft of a human being.

And thank you also Priyanka Srivastava for the original suggestion, which is so compelling.

© 2020 Trisha Traughber. Thanks for reading.

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