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Summary

The website proposes the formation of a meaningful writers' workshop over Zoom, emphasizing mutual feedback for improvement.

Abstract

The article on the website titled "undefined" discusses the concept of creating a writers' workshop conducted via Zoom, aiming to provide a platform for writers to improve their work through constructive group feedback. The idea is to establish a supportive community where each member is actively involved in both providing and receiving critiques. The proposed structure involves sharing a work-in-progress ahead of each session, followed by both verbal and written feedback from all participants. The group is envisioned as a space free from dominance, arguing, and promotion, focusing solely on writing improvement. The author seeks input on potential flaws in the concept, suggestions for improvement, strategies for success, and interest in participation. The author also emphasizes the importance of authentic and honest feedback, acknowledging their own preference for direct and thorough critiques.

Opinions

  • The author believes that writing in isolation can lead to overestimating one's work quality and stunt growth due to unnoticed flaws.
  • The author values a group dynamic where all members are equally engaged and committed to providing meaningful feedback, without allowing any individual to dominate the discussions.
  • The author encourages a culture of respectful and constructive criticism, suggesting that the best response to feedback is gratitude.
  • The author is open to change in the group's structure to better serve its members, indicating a flexible approach to the workshop's format.
  • The author has a strong preference for detailed and actionable feedback, as opposed to vague and non-specific praise.

WRITERS HELPING WRITERS

Can We Form a Helpful Meaningful Writers’ Workshop on Zoom?

I’d like to. You?

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Writing can be a lonely sport. Often is.

Also, without the perspective provided by others, one can fall into a series of traps, thinking one’s work is better than it really is, or failing to progress and grow as a writer, overlooking flaws, even fatal ones. More traps await the unwary isolated author.

I’ve been there, am there, and want to break out.

You?

Here’s the Concept

  • “Meet” on a schedule via Zoom or similar shared platform.
  • Form a manageable-sized group of respectful, thoughtful, sensitive writers interested in using group feedback to improve their writing.
  • Each meeting is used to “workshop” a work-in-progress by a group member who volunteers to have his/she/their work worked on.
  • Non-participant, observer-only, writers not allowed. In other words, one must have one’s writing “worked on” by the group AND must actively provide feedback on the writing of others.
  • No group “hijackers” allowed. Everyone gets to play equally in this sandbox. (We’ll give you the “hook” if you try to dominate the group.) 😀
  • No arguing, bickering, tit-for-tat, etc. Best response to any feedback is “thank you.”
  • The group’s purpose is writing improvement, not making more money writing or understanding more about promoting one’s writing.

Structure

  • A few days prior to each meeting, one writer’s work-in-progress gets circulated to group members.
  • Group members “read ahead” and come to the meeting prepared to provide meaningful feedback.
  • Written comments — ??sent via email?? — on the chosen writer’s work would trail the meeting.
  • Each group member MUST provide written and verbal feedback to the writer.
  • Group can change over time to best serve its members’ needs.

What I’d Like From You Now

  • Kindly tell me why this concept will fail
  • Suggest ways to improve the concept
  • Suggest ways to ensure workshop success
  • Suggest ways to improve the structure
  • Indicate your interest in participating, or lack thereof

Full Disclosure

There was a time when having my work critiqued felt like my infant son had been kicked down a long flight of non-carpeted stairs. Those days are LONG gone. I like my stuff torn up, butchered, metaphorically bloodied by red editors’ ink. You get the picture. I REALLY want to become a better writer and focused feedback seems like a big part of the path there. I’m also sensitive to the fact that my feedback style may not be a good fit for everyone.

Authentic, honest, helpfully-oriented, from the heart and a place of love, all about the work not the person who did the work, seems like the right feedback posture to me.

At this point I have no idea about how to select/assemble the group.

Least favorite phrases (AKA the kind grandmother comment on one’s writing)

“I like it.”

“That’s nice.”

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