Calling All Poets: When a Group of Poets Find a Loophole We Create
A call for poets to create a collaborative Loop poem

Following four successful collaborations, here is the fifth experiment. Don’t be shy - if you love to write poetry, please contribute, even if your name is not on the call list. It is a great way to connect with other poets and is a testimony of the creativity of group thinking. While this will appear random, I do not believe in randomness as being accidental. This poem will unfold as it is supposed to unfold by poets meant to come together.
While the other poems were free verse, we will spice it up this time by doing a Loop poem. A Loop poem uses the last word of the previous line and starts the next line with that ending word. No rhyming scheme. For example:
I took a pen and created a picture picture me, now ink for eyes eyes now have it it is one that makes no sense
All are invited to participate.
How this will work is that to participate, you must set comments to MOST RECENT (just click the ^ by Most Relevant at the top of the comment section).
If you are the first to comment, you can choose any theme. Do not be influenced by the title of this story or the image. You set the stage. Put #1 by your line. Say nothing else in that comment.
The second person reads only #1 and then responds with #2, starting their line with the last word of #1.
The third person responds to line #2 without reading #1. And then writes #3, incorporating their last word.
And so forth.
The biggest challenge is simultaneous placing. Check to see if you are the number you thought you were; someone may have beaten you. Adjust.
I will periodically (after my response) comprise the lines for viewing. I may make minor edits in the end.
It is important to read only the previous line and respond.
This work will be open in creation mode for about a week or until it utters its last breath.
Then there will be a subsequent posting with the complete poem.
Thank you all for participating. Let the creativity begin!

STOP if you want to contribute and have not done so. Write your line first.
The growing poem
I had too many choices to choose from. Had to roll my dice right this time. Time for a dream coming to a screeching halt, not before the crown of thorns grabs ahold. Ahold as I kiss the morning leaf’s dew, taste the moon’s sweetness and drink in the pink sky. Sky high, I fly beyond the moon and stars, to reach the heavens, to soar with you. You clasp my waist with reverence, severance in sojourned trysts, encircling my nipples with your nymph tongue. Tongue is where the love is, we all know that, but will it last until dawn? Dawn reveals itself gradually, and we’re still entwined Entwined in each other’s arms, in a love that lasts forever Forever, she dreams — arrives suddenly, without warning Warning of golden glistening mornings, inflamed with vexing vicissitudes Vicissitudes that flowed with deep sensations Sensations felt as waves of reverberating vibrations that jostle the soul Soul navigating life’s fluctuating sea, each moment presents a crossroad, guiding our destiny. Destiny of what we make or assigned, still a mystery. Mystery is but a hoax, read the last chapter first First reveal the ending, unbind the narrative’s thirst Thirst for awareness might be a life long dedication Dedictation, the Mystery abounds among such sadly missed stories. Stories of souls dressed in words and clothes are but shallow imitations.
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